| Reviews for Spice and Fox |
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Shooba chapter 1 . 9/14/2014 To put it bluntly: this story is full of bad grammar, incomplete sentences, and inappropriately shifting tense. If you're quite young then I apologize. Also, while foxes do live in groups very similar to wolf packs (parents, offspring, previous offspring) only females will stick around to help raise young. |
Reldresal chapter 1 . 7/1/2014 About The Hitchhiker's guide to the Doctor. Self-loathing? That sums up the Ninth? |
WNxBrontus chapter 6 . 12/23/2013 Haha, a very well done story. you thought things out well and managed to get around the Lore without changing much. nice cant wait for the next chapter |
Detinc chapter 6 . 9/10/2013 Great story so far! I love how you are following the Spice and Wolf theme, replacing Holo with Ahri and adding elements from League. I am looking forward to the next chapters! |
Insert name here chapter 6 . 8/23/2013 Good chapter, I always enjoy reading your stories. They're very well written and always a treat to read. Very good job basing this off the lore, except I did not know Noxian necromancers could speak ancient Latin. ) |
voteforgoaway chapter 1 . 6/16/2013 I NEED MORE AHRI |
Guest chapter 5 . 6/9/2013 ... is there a specific reason why you abandoned the story? it was just starting to get good... |
hedgehogsandwich chapter 5 . 10/16/2012 oh god this is amazing. it's been a while since you last updated, but if you continue this i will love you forever haha |
Ziri Senpai chapter 5 . 9/10/2012 sooo bump... |
evilanimegenious chapter 5 . 6/13/2012 But i like lemons...in cake form of course XD |
Washed Clean chapter 5 . 5/9/2012 Well, we have another buildup. Detail is decent as always, but again, it's too short. I also feel that it's not really going anywhere...I'll just have to wait and see. |
O.verP.owered chapter 5 . 5/8/2012 Awesome chapter! |
Washed Clean chapter 4 . 4/27/2012 For a non-lemon, this was decent. Strong detail, great descriptions-on a fundamental level, it's good. However...that's about it. And you have a few issues. First off, your portrayal of necromancers. It could be just because I'm a warcraft nerd, but I can't see them throwing "light-emanating orbs" or "healing mortal wounds". But that's your decision. You also have a few issue with person. You mostly speak in the third person, but a few lines are in the second person, and there's even one or two lines in the first person. Keep going. Just make sure you write another LoL lemon. Preferably not a virgnity story, either. Bye, you internet sex god. |
WaddleBuff chapter 4 . 4/26/2012 Sorry for taking such a long time to update! T_T Please don't leave. haha Anyway, next chapter will be out by the end of the month. And don't worry, Ahri will return in all of her foxy glory. And if you want something to look forward to, there just might a lemon in future chapters. ;) Sayonara |
BraK3R chapter 4 . 4/26/2012 the stuffed teddy bear could be... TIBBERS! |