Ew. :/

Definately spring-like.

I like this series. You write Gandalf well.

Frodo the prankster?! That's funny!

Very powerfully written story about free will. It makes Denethor's end much more tragic.

Great to see the Hobbits from this point of view. Thanks for writing

Nice chapter.
Small blooms, but with big hearts...

Great stuff.

Excellent chapters. Beautifully written as always. Thanks for writing

Ah, thank you for taking care of the one so often forgotten. (And for a realization even more brilliant than yours about the Hill, read my story "Feanaro's Epic Fail".)

This is a lovely scene, so clearly imagined! And I like it that even in this situation, strange and disorientating and desperate as it is, Gandalf finds something to laugh. ;-)

I love this: "Oh, yes! These were lungs..." etc. It's such a subtle thought and action that one would hardly ever think about it. But it makes perfect sense that one who'd been walking around without such needs would find them a bit disconcerting and have to think them through. I think that's one of those things that makes me enjoy your writing so much. You take these little details and spin them around to an angle that no one has ever thought of before.

A fantastic portrayal of this moment. Thanks for writing

Sad and true and wise.

A wonderful set of chapters. Thanks for updating! I particularly enjoyed reading the Yule celebrations.

Interesting.