Oh my /good/ goddess. Can I just talk about this. Can I talk about how excellent this story is chocking itself up to be, I am positively sold. SOLD.

It's never fails to amaze me how much in love I still am with any instances of Gaa/Naru even after all these years of taking a break from them. Perhaps more exciting is having found such a wonderfully written (and lengthy, I feel spoiled, fam) story on this pairing's circuit. And it's just chapter two. The last paragraph took me out, by the way. A freaking red faced mess is how you left me, perfect way to end the chapter. Gaara's unabashed adoration and mental declarations is and are killing me my dude; I'm hooked.

And please for the love of all things good, bless you for encapsulating and expanding more on the sand sibs family love. Ten years are added to my life everytime I see Kankuro and Temari doting on their big deal of a (guilty worry wart) baby brother.

this chapter took me a minute to settle into, the last 6 fanfictions I read have been in the third person...

This story took me from high to low. It was like a rollercoaster. I loved every bit of it. Keep doing what you do because this is a really good story. BTW Gaara is AMAZING!

I love cute sand sibling moments :3 I really wish in Naruto they could have cute family moments I love the sand siblings! Cant wait to read on.

I loved this story! I think making it exclusively from Gaara's POV was a great choice, and you portrayed him wonderfully. Great job!

Beautifully written story. I loved how they ended up together. Can't wait for the sequel.

That was amazing

Amazing story. Thank you for letting us get acquainted with your talent)))

That was an amazing story and I enjoyed reading every second of it. You write so well and your style makes it to where I thought I was right there, in Gaara's mind. You did a good job at having really deep feelings but still keeping him in character (a hard thing to do in my opinion). Loved it and I will be reading the next one _

This is easily my favorite Naruto fanfiction ever. Hand down. This was an amazing story, and you really did a fantastic job. The characterization, the conflicts, their development...just...everything! You should be so proud of yourself. c:

The way you wrote this chapter was wonderful. The slow escalation of conflict, leading up to the final reveal. I think we all know how Gaara feels hearing that. :(

Great characterization!

Damn this was awesome!

What an amazing first chapter!

holy crap i didn't see that coming!