Reviews for Fire Is Catching |
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![]() ![]() Pretty good story VMA1998 (I got the name right , right?!) Love A123 xoxo ️ |
![]() ![]() Oh katniss dear, that hunger is called arousal. And it means you do like him. Or your body finds him compatible enough |
![]() ![]() incredable! everything is so unprdictied it's great (sorry about the spelling I'm dislexic) |
![]() ![]() it's really good but no affence this chapter was bad |
![]() ![]() ![]() Thank you for sharing your story. I have enjoyed reading it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Loved the mushy ending. ;) |
![]() ![]() The always HP! |
![]() ![]() All of ur stories r beyong amazing, they're beautiful...u r by far one of my fav authors n i have only 2 including u |
![]() ![]() Amazing |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm actually about to cry real tears |
![]() ![]() Why is her dad alive |
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![]() ![]() I wish you had mentioned Finnick and the other people when they were training for the game. Maybe make Peeta get mad at katiness for kissing him. When she was at the station with the rope scene in the book. |
![]() ![]() Well it is very good but just to let you know it would have been better if you made katniss have twins. Like she was happy it was all over but it really isn't. Also I think it would be good if katniss got pregnit agen, and the family's know, but the baby comes early. Also when the baby comes early katniss should be going to the capital, but the train gets bombing. The train gets bombing because snow I mad katniss kicked him out of his job. So katniss is in labor for the longest time and has her baby is born on an the train, right after she was found. Finally katniss is giving birth and the baby comes out with the cord around its neck so she has to push the baby back in. It well also be very difficult because she has been in labor for so long and she is hungry and dehydrated. Also katniss'es daughter should be put in the hunger games and she also cheats like katniss. Or president snow rapes her and she gives birth in the area, and they don't stop it so the baby lives but not Hope. Or something else that I can't think of at the moment. WAIT K HAVE ONE MORE IDEA. Hope should be kidnaped and turned into a avox. Also giving birth should take a really long time. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Does hope die? Please say no! |