Reviews for Masterpiece
gabzep chapter 4 . 12/27/2016
So sweet!
Jesusfollower97 chapter 4 . 7/4/2014
That was Really Good! I am so in love with this story! Please Please PLEASE update! :D 3 -love a sister in Christ
Jesusfollower97 chapter 1 . 7/4/2014
Okay so I reviewed for this story and two others of yours on your other account, can you still get them or should I re-post them here?
Russetfire chapter 1 . 3/4/2014
This was by far easily the best story I have read on this site!
You are sooooo talented and I am going to admitted I did cry! I know you probably don't come on fan fiction anymore but just in case you do I am writing this. I think you should totally continue this story. Also what you said about Peeta life up until the Hunger games sounded sooooo interesting. Peeta is my favorite character and I thought you did it so well! I love all your other Narnia stories also. Being a God girl myself I enjoyed every word of them. This was my favorite story and I am down on my knees begging you to continue. Would it help if I added a cherry on top? I hope I am not coming off as annoying I just really love your writing! I hope you get this message I really do! Please continue to do what you do! I will be watching! I hope you have a blessed day/week! Your biggest fan Russetfire
big fan chapter 4 . 2/22/2014
I really enjoyed this story I was captivated the moment I read the first sentence! It as so perfect and it just got better and better and better! You have a real talent and I really want you to write more to it! Little 'Peet' stole my heart. I think it would be a great idea for you to do all the way up to reaping day! :-) I don't want to pester you it's just really good! Thanks. Your biggest fan.
rabraham7898 chapter 4 . 12/7/2013
please please please write more this is amazing
seaotter99 chapter 4 . 2/1/2013
Little Peeta is so adorable. Please update
Eadin chapter 4 . 1/20/2013
I would really like to say that this is a truly fantastic story from the beginning to this point, and I would really love to see more. As you can see, I don't have an account as of yet, but if you would like, I can provide feedback if you are stuck on ideas. You may not want to, but that's alright. I would gladly just let you do your thing if you would rather. I love this story. It is beautifully crafted and the character development is fantastic. (Excuse my over-use of the word "fantastic" as I watch Doctor Who a lot ;). ) I would love it if you would ever upload more. I hope you keep writing and I wish you the best of luck from a fellow writer. Also a hat tip to you from a only-slightly-experienced writer. ;) -Eadin
thygameofhunger chapter 4 . 1/5/2013
Please Continue this!
PrincessStarberry chapter 4 . 11/10/2012
This is such a sweet story, I hope more follows as well :)
yellowdress chapter 4 . 10/21/2012
please update soon this is great! :)
LizaLovesPeeta chapter 4 . 9/17/2012
I enjoyed how you gave us a glimpse of their developing personalities. How the boys fit in different roles and how different traits of their personalities star to show. Responsible Lax, snarky Rye, sweet Peeta, dedicated pap-bear-Wade! My heart tore a little with Peeta's recognition that he was not hugged, loved, by his mother, and even more seeing how Wade was aware and how it may affect him. He clearly was a doting father, im curious to see when things got out of control and why?
Beautiful story! Please, pretty please continue!
LizaLovesPeeta chapter 1 . 9/17/2012
What a sweet chapter. The mental image of Wade comforting, feeding,nwslking, loving and chatting up with his tiny baby is extremely endearing. He knows his wife has detached herself from her kids (or maybe from Peeta) -and I'd love to see you explain why-so he's filling in the nurturing job.
I love the idea of a story ocusing on the Mellark men and how their family dynamics evolved, how the physical abuse started and how or why Wade allowed it.
There's so much potential on this story!
In all mushy inside picturing a cooing baby Peeta!
FTA92 chapter 4 . 8/11/2012
Moremoremore! So cute!
guest chapter 4 . 8/2/2012
Please udates soon, this is such a beautiful sweet story. I love it so much, and i really cant wait to read more. UPDATE!
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