| Reviews for The Human Mating Ritual |
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Guest chapter 5 . 4/4/2015 Uhhh there gonna have a lot of kids at a young age Jks |
Guest chapter 2 . 2/21/2014 Astral ruined it |
Falcon Disciple chapter 5 . 12/22/2013 That was quite the story there. Damn fine writing, Damn fine. YOU DESERVE A HIGH 5! |
ZeXaLWTF chapter 1 . 8/25/2013 I never knew Astral was such a complete PERVERT! |
ZeXaL chapter 6 . 8/5/2013 lol i loved the 'you mean when you go super saiyan with astral' part i couldn't stop laughing. |
Cloud chapter 1 . 7/10/2013 it was good and i didnt think it was that short |
CherryPieEvenings chapter 2 . 2/11/2013 luv astral's "astral-ness"! i could really see him say that stuff! |
Fallen Plus chapter 5 . 11/21/2012 So, wait a minute... would this technically count as a threesome? |
Digidestined Dude 15 chapter 6 . 11/8/2012 OMFG! Emphasis on the F! This was the funniest ZEXAL story I've ever read! Great job! Now I just wonder how Yuma would explain same-gender sex to Astral... |
Guest chapter 4 . 10/21/2012 it's more morphing dance or whatever than super sayan |
The JamesS chapter 5 . 9/12/2012 I love chapter 5 Observation 5: Sex is a wonderful thing it was great. |
The JamesS chapter 4 . 9/12/2012 I lovechapter 4 Observation 4: Mating is pleasurable it was great. |
The JamesS chapter 3 . 9/12/2012 I love chapter 3 Observation 3: ZEXAL is very useful it was great. |
The JamesS chapter 2 . 9/12/2012 I love chapter 2 Observation 2: Humans are strange it was great. |
The JamesS chapter 1 . 9/12/2012 I love chapter 1 Observation 1: Watching is not welcome it was great. |