Reviews for The Human Mating Ritual
Guest chapter 5 . 4/4/2015
Uhhh there gonna have a lot of kids at a young age Jks
Guest chapter 2 . 2/21/2014
Astral ruined it
Falcon Disciple chapter 5 . 12/22/2013
That was quite the story there. Damn fine writing, Damn fine. YOU DESERVE A HIGH 5!
ZeXaLWTF chapter 1 . 8/25/2013
I never knew Astral was such a complete PERVERT!
ZeXaL chapter 6 . 8/5/2013
lol i loved the 'you mean when you go super saiyan with astral' part i couldn't stop laughing.
Cloud chapter 1 . 7/10/2013
it was good and i didnt think it was that short
CherryPieEvenings chapter 2 . 2/11/2013
luv astral's "astral-ness"! i could really see him say that stuff!
Fallen Plus chapter 5 . 11/21/2012
So, wait a minute... would this technically count as a threesome?
Digidestined Dude 15 chapter 6 . 11/8/2012
OMFG! Emphasis on the F! This was the funniest ZEXAL story I've ever read! Great job!
Now I just wonder how Yuma would explain same-gender sex to Astral...
Guest chapter 4 . 10/21/2012
it's more morphing dance or whatever than super sayan
The JamesS chapter 5 . 9/12/2012
I love chapter 5 Observation 5: Sex is a wonderful thing it was great.
The JamesS chapter 4 . 9/12/2012
I lovechapter 4 Observation 4: Mating is pleasurable it was great.
The JamesS chapter 3 . 9/12/2012
I love chapter 3 Observation 3: ZEXAL is very useful it was great.
The JamesS chapter 2 . 9/12/2012
I love chapter 2 Observation 2: Humans are strange it was great.
The JamesS chapter 1 . 9/12/2012
I love chapter 1 Observation 1: Watching is not welcome it was great.
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