Great chapter! Update soon! :D

Update soon! Now we're getting somewhere!

So many grammar mistakes... But it is good so far.

Yay an update! I can't wait to see what's next! Hopefully Ed and Winry can straighten out their relationship and figure outeverything with Al! Update soon!

This story is incredible...I think everything you are doing with this is perfect please please please update soon! By far the best post cos I've ever read!

Every chapter I read makes me more anxious for the next...your worrying is amazing just so we are clear

Craziness! I hope Ed doesn't linger in limbo for long...

Omg poor Winry, to be through hell time and again...

Glad that was settled! :)

I'm glad that you decided to continue, there are a lot of conflicts for the three of them that you could throw into the plot, so this story has a lot of potential.

I reallllly love this story! Thx 4 the update!

Haha, this chapter made me remember my own childhood. So, thanks for that. The conversation between Al and Winry confused me a little bit.

Anyway, keep it up.

lol, end of the chapter is funny! :)

I like this :D The only thing is that sometimes the writing feels like it moves too fast. For example:

"Winry couldn't keep from crying and threw herself at Edward grasping the sides of his trench coat afraid if she were to let go he would disappear again. "Oh Ed I must really be dreaming but if I am I want to stay asleep." She cried in his chest. He returned her embrace and began to stroke her hair.

"Winry this isn't a dream this is the other side of the gate." He said into her hair. Her eyes widened and she let go and stepped back."

This is well written but at the same time It read really quickly.

You could change it more into:

"Winry couldn't keep from crying as she threw herself at Edward. She grasped the sides of his trench coat, afraid if she were to let go he would disappear again. "Oh Ed I must really be dreaming... but if I am I want to stay asleep." She cried in his chest. He returned her embrace and began to stroke her hair.

"Winry this isn't a dream" He said into her hair. "This is the other side of the gate." Her eyes widened and she let go of his coat.

You see what I did there? I added words in between the dialogue and halved some long sentences to make it flow better.

I think I understand where Noah is coming from. I mean, if you were in a relatinship and then somebody comes out of nowhere and ruins it you'd be pissed off too, wouldn't you?

Anyway, keep up the great work. )