Ahhhh this is so... sweet! Haha sorry, couldn't resist. But it really is an adorable story and I loved every minute of reading it. Great work!

I love the story, and dialogue. I wish, as a christian, that you had saved any sex till after marriage. It should be treasured. Despite that, it was a very nice story. Hurrah!

You should make one of these a lemon

The sneaky Devil HaHa! he knows he soo knows he knew all along its gonna be even funnier when she finds out i can feel it ;D
its gonna be so peak! it is going to be Soo PE;'''''''''DAK! HahAhahaha and im going to be like ha ahaha aHaHaHahahahahahahhhaaASDFGHJKLASDFGHJKLASDFGHJKLASDFGHJKLASDFGHJKL!?£ ##*$¥?!%#
its gonna be like-.. you know what i cant even predict it, ive got so many theories ..
haha thories..ha ahaha aHaHaHahahahahahahhhaaASDFGHJKLASDFGHJKLASDFGHJKLASDFGHJKLASDFGHJKL!?£ ##*$¥?!%# im so weird;''

I cannot WAIT untill she realises who shes been .. well, f***ing
it is going to be HilAriOus, she'll be like:
...oh my God! i've been f***ing the f***king bane of my F***.ING Existense!
and im just gonna LAU;''''''''''DGH! HahaAhahaaaaaASDFGHJKL!£&#%$?¥#%

kid pervert :)

Best ending ever! I'm not even kidding, I burst out laughing! This story made me fall a little bit more in love with our favorite speedster.

THAT WAS SSSSSSOOOOOOO CUTE AND AMAZING AND AWESOME AND CUTE AND... YAH! :P

so. much. cute. I. can't. I was in a bit of a slump but this fanfiction just makes me feel all warm and fuzzy.

That was so great :D :) i hope you write more Wall/Artemis stories cause they are awesome :) :)

You ended it on a really funny note, a nice touch. I loved the story. :)

did he ever find out Artemis is ARTEMIS

Really funny! :D Love it!

That was an awesome first chapter I will keep reading so keep updating

I'm a big fan anyway, but I just found this. Great story. Loved every chapter of it.