How is the Link's state in the beginning of the chapter not Ghirahim's fault? The way I see it, the Demon King ordered Ghirahim to either defect the Hero or kill him. The way the demon acts though makes me think what he did is not exactly what Demise had in mind despite what's written in the start of chapter 10. Second time rereading this story, and it's still as good as the first time!

This fictin is something AWESOME that I haven't red like before ! I like everything about it , and I like the way you write it too ! I just hope that maybe you update ? I really like to know what will happen next 'cuz I'm really excited ! Thanks for this FABULOUS piece of art and I look out for more :)

Ugh.
Part of me regrets reading this because now I want an update so bad and another part of me is happy that I found this because it's to brilliant. If you can update soon I would be extremely happy.

I don't even know how to appropriately respond to your story, you send my heart and mind in all directions. You make the characters very believable and full of depth. I love how you add back story to Fi and have Fi and Ghirahim have a past. I am just astounded by this story and how artfully it is done. You have a masterpiece and are a very exceptional writer. I am just entranced by this story and everything it entails. I am anxious to read more and to see what will happen to this assortment of characters and to see if Ghirahim will end up on top in the end, or if Link will elude his full grasp. Thank you for writing such an enthralling story!

This story is amazing. If you made this a book, I would totally be one of the first to buy it. Please notify us if you ever start publishing one! This is good stuff!

But if you don't, please update. I'm dying without the continuation of this awesome story, and I'm sure the others are, too! D:

I won't read this story yet because you haven't updated in 6 months. But I will follow it on the off chance it might get another chapter. I hope you are doing well and enjoying the finer things in life that lie outside the world of fanfiction - after all you are not obligated to update. Writing is something you do out of love for it.

No update in four months eh?

Well ;_;

If you ever decide to write a novel, let me know cause I'll read through it and enjoy it as thoroughly as I've enjoyed this fanfic. Seriously I read the whole damn thing today, and I don't regret having done so for a second. I don't think I'm blowing any minds here when I say you're one of the few fanfic writers on this site that carry some real potential in your writing. I love how you're able to take the simplistic premise of skyward sword and build an entire world around it. The characters are well rounded, equal parts strong and weak, likable, and hate-able. The dialogue is witty, fun to read (and just as fun to write I'd imagine), and the character interactions never fail to grab my interest. All of it geared towards the juxtaposition of right and wrong, truth and lie, and the deconstruction of the 'goddesses' chosen hero' as well as the concept of 'destiny' we see in many a Zelda game.

You sir, have created a masterpiece, even if you don't full realize this yourself and it would be a damn shame not to continue it.

Pleaseeeeeeeeee keep writing this! It is so good! I have been checking everyday since February for a new chapter! Don't give up!

Holy crap. I don't even know what to say, I'm at a loss for words. I guess I'll say I read all of this in three days, and I was so drawn in that I was reading during school classes.

This is probably the sole most intriguing and original fic I've had the pleasure of reading on this site.

I've also been reading the prequel, but since there are only seven updated rewritten chapters, I haven't got much background, but this was written well enough where I didn't quite need it.

Your skill in imagery is fantastic, and you have such an obvious power over your vocabulary. Your characters are flawed but likeable, and so human in every aspect that you can really relate to them. I've laughed out loud through this multiple times, because your dialogue is extremely witty and fun to read.

Your twisted characters, such as Ghirahim, Calwren, and Sheik are fantastic. I love reading about them. Especially Ghirahim interacting with anyone, because of how manipulatively genius he is. Your interpretation of his character is fantastic.

I've also enjoyed the introspect on your version of Ghirahim and Fi's previous relations.

Really, overall this is a stellar piece. It could be a published book. Can't wait for your next chapters, and congratulations on writing such a fantastic piece! I honestly am jealous of your mad writing skills. Great job.

-Leila

...All I have to say is Midna is completely BA. She kicked Ghira's butt in one move! That's crazy! Anyways, they're all on the surface now. I wonder what's gonna happen?

Wait, so Link's death WASN'T a dream? But he's still alive? Ouchies, my brain :I

Awww... I'm torn between feeling sorry for Ghira and... Well, not feeling sorry for him. Torture is not a good thing... But he tortured Link... But... My brain is mush so this probably doesn't make sense :I

Okay, so I was gonna go to bed... But I wanna see why there are so many chapters left and I'm too feelsy to sleep T.T

Interesting... So there have been heroes BEFORE Link? Will that come into play more later? Wait, no, don't answer that, because I wanna find out myself!

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Did... Did you TRICK ME?! I just spent like five minutes staring at the screen, not having the WILL to even roll over in my bed because I was so full of feels, and it turns out Link is ALIVE?! WAT WTF

I'm so confused right now :I he has his tunic back too? Did he dream all of that? What in the world is going on? MY BRAIN

WAIT SOMEBODY JUST ATTACKED GHIRA WTH EVERYTHING IS HAPPENING SO FAST

...PIPIT?! PIPIT! PIPIT'S HERE! EVERYTHING MUST COME OUT OKAY IF PIPIT'S THERE :D

Ho. Ly. SCHTICK. Pipit's words are being used against him! D:

And he's being VIOLATED! And he likes ZELDA! Maybe I shouldn't have started this chapter tonight... Now I'm all riled up!

Wait he also... PIPIT! My poor, poor little Pipit... I guess I'll just have to comfort him... *shifty eyes*

MIDNA?! I KNEW she'd show up! FINALLY some answers!

...I just realised I have a tendency to use all caps in my reviews... It's the feels talking.

I'm gonna go to bed... Too many feels for me to handle :P

Hi! I have nothing to do today (except homework but who cares :P) so I decided before I procrastinate I'm gonna review as many chapters as I can!

No Link! You should have accepted then escaped and rallied an army! Think of Pipit, THINK OF PIPIT! D:

Okay, you just told me my question is gonna be answered, so I'm not gonna ask what I've been asking for like, two chapters now... Though I'm repeating it over and over in my head T.T

WHOAH MORE SEDUCTION. Hey is this like the Skyview Temple boss fight.. Except not in the temple? Because this looks familiar... Or I'm just being stupid :P

See this is what Link gets! He gets distracted by Ghira's rambling and ends up with daggers in his side!

HOLY SCHTICK LINK'S DYING ISN'T HE DX

HE'S DYING AND THE GODDESS SWORD JUST SHATTERED

Way to make me cry... Whyyyyy! I was so sure he was gonna make it cause like, there are a ton of chapters left and the story isn't even COMPLETED and he's the main character and he NEVER EVEN RAN INTO PIPIT'S ARMSSSSS

...I'm sad. My feels have now taken over my body. T.T

I'm back! :3

Ohhhhhhhh, so THAT'S why he was cuddling Link. I KNEW it wasn't just for the heck of it! Ghira, you sly, sly little demon!

Is... Is he SEDUCING Link? Oh, dear... XD

Ooooooh, Link is getting him good! Hey Ghira, you need some ice for that burn?

WAIT NO does this mean that Link is gonna die?! Cause if so then he can stop burning Ghira now!

Oh wait, is he gonna escape now? Cause he has Fi and everything and Ghira's like... Away. I'm eagerly awaiting the moment he goes running back into Pipit's arms! :D

I'm back! With another review so soon?! Le gasp! :O I'm on a roll!

Anyways, lets get started :3

Oh, Link. Your sassiness brings me no end of amusement XD

WAIT WHOAH BACK UP REWIND. WAS THAT MIDNA?!

But what if it WASN'T Link's imagination and Midna's there and she's working for the enemy an she was trying to get Link's love child in Skyloft and :(

WHOAH WHOAH WHOAH! Now Ghira's hugging people? And Link's had a dream about his death? My MIIIIIIIIIIIND

Link's not gonna die is he? Because I got a crapload of chapters left to review and he's the hero and!

He's gonna do what Ghira wants, right? Then eacape because he's Link and he's clever and sassy and then he'll run back into Pipit's arms and form an army and kick Ghira's butt, right? RIGHT?

I really hope so :(

I'm, uh... I'm back... *awkward silence*

School, man! School has been tearing me UP! I can barely concentrate on my own fics!

But enough about me. Lets get on to this long-awaited review, eh?

Oooh, not even gonna lie, Lilith is pretty B. A. You know, for a villain and all :P I like her!

Poor Link, he's being labeled Ghirahim's lover XD hey, whatever keeps you alive and running back into Pipit's arms, amirite? ;P

Ah ha! I knew Lilith wasn't THAT bad! She has respect! Again, I like her. She's a very interesting character and I hope I get to find more out about her in the future :3

I'm getting a bad feeling about Midna... This whole talk about most hybrids and heretics preferring Twilight is very suspicious... *rubs chin*

Finally! I reviewed! Happy dances for all! :D

Onto the next chapter!