That was a lovely exploration of the inner workings of Raven's mind! The text was a little flowery at times, but your grasp of the characters (Robin, Star and Cyborg included) and the natural dialogue made for a great reading experience. I also appreciated all of the little parallels and metaphors who sprinkled throughout the two-shot. Thanks for writing this!

I loved this. This, this is what I crave in BBRae. Amazing job!

I know I’m late to this, but here’s a review for you! A great story, I loved it. Your writing style is beautiful, I felt as though I was there in the story.

This was so good! The characters felt (to me) fully in characteron top of that the depiction of their getting-together was very real-life. No matter who they are, they’re younghaven’t fully matured, don’t have much experience with their own or others’ adult relationshipsthis doesn’t pretend otherwise.
They both have learned insecurity, even if Gar powers through it by sheer force of will most of the time lol. Navigating intimacy- giving and accepting!is a long, definitely challenging process. This fit into that well and was very charming. Thanks for the story!

Incredible! Definitely going right to the favorites list.

Just found this. One word: Outstanding!

I'm no a reviewer, but this story doesn't have enough reviews so... 7 years later i say,

Great story. Characters were done really well

fine, if you want a review this is it:
I loved every second of it, from the change in Raven's control over her body, beastboy's attraction to her fangs, and the clear confusion over Raven's ability to receive and react to beastboy's affection was amazing. Add in her unconscious inaction in expressing her own desires and you have an amazing story.
However what I didn't enjoy was the fact it was only two chapters. that was mean, your story was amazing and clearly only the beginning. So with a heavy heart I must demand you updated soon or continue with a story with these points in it.
Pretty please with sugar and cookies on top.

really fantastic. It's 2am and I work way too early to be up this late, but I had to finish this. That's how good it is.

I came to this story because of your kind words regarding my own little efforts. I must thank you for that, both for being able to enjoy a well written story and giving me something very specific to think about. It was the line from Raven's inner monologue where she observed that he was supposed to be the immature one who ruined moments, not her. It made me think about how emotional distance does not equal maturity... in fact the opposite. It will play into my own story.

Wow. Just. Wow

This is definitely the best Raven and Beast Boy fan fic ever. Hell, maybe even the best Teen Titans fan fic. You capture all of the characters so well!
Also, being an introvert myself, I appreciate and love what you've done with this story. A lot of people don't understand how an introvert 'works' and/or 'thinks', so is really awesome how you put it so beautifully in this story. Thank you!
By the way, I love the part were there was two conversations happening at once, it was really funny. I aslo love your style of writing. I am definitely going to check more of your stories.
Peace and Love my friend.

Omg this story was surprisingly well written! I was drooling over your gorgeous grammar and sentence structure! Huehuehue! Really nice! Loved it! :3

This is really good!

So your story is worth .01 touches? :P