Thank god she didn't sleep with that girl. Great story. The angst was great, but I kinda wish that Maura had been a little more angry or hurt. That's about it though on the negatives. I really like your writing and didn't have to stop and think "Did they even check this before posting?". So thank you for that ;)

A very talented writer

I liked the idea. Maybe a bit Drama would have been great, but still good story.

You write them so beautifully that I am almost jealous. Haha. So well done! :)

i know this is one shot.. but i hope you will write some fic with more angst and drama like this one... it will be awsome.. thx

You need to revisit your punctuation - several instances of inappropriate use of commas.

Sorry makes it jarring so not read past first paragraph.