LO FUCKING L that was pricless

You totally should.
Just saying

You should make a second chapter and talk about how will Seto punish Jaden for the false information in the letter or something like that or tell about Jaden or tell what Jaden is doing at Jessie's house

oh, for a second, I was like "Omg! Find him!"
but once I read the side note I was like "Oh jaden..."

is there going to be another chapter of what's he doing at Jesse's? or what kaiba will do to him when he get him?

*reads fanfiction then proceeds to fall to the floor lagging like a maniac* OMG! THAT WAS TO FUNNY
_ loved the story you should write more of these

Phfff! So Jaden. Hehehe. Looking forward to more!

LLLLLLOOOOOOOOLLLLLLLL! Oh my Slifer! Jaden has got some balls to do that! HAHAHAHAH!

Please, can I borrow what was said in the letter for a one-shot?! IT WAS JUST TOO FUNNY!

sequel

To be honest, the language use was extremely simplistic, for a good idea like this, that could be built up and perfected on, the language use was disappointing.
Furthermore, I do not appreciate such messages sent to me, and it is disappointing that you have to ...beg to get reviews. If you wanted accurate reviews, it would do you well not to ask for them.

*Sweat-dropped.

More

yyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee eeeeeeesssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssss (yes)

yes u should post more chapter

Really hilarious! Hahaha you just don't know how I reacted after reading...
at first I was like...oh I love this idea! I really see kaiba as jaden's father and serenity as his mother X3
the part mentioned in the summary...yeah that one...I was already snickering that time...I had to repress my giggles (it was 3 in the morning here in my country...don't wanna wake anyone up) thinking along the lines of jaden-and-clean-does-not-mix-well and he-is-up-to-something-fun...as if on cue, random antics popped in my head (like when plot bunnies attack! XD)
*fangirlmomenthere* aaw jaden's so unbearably cute in my own little world...anyway...I was going my merry way towards dreamland thinking about jay's silly cuteness and call it the night in the meantime...when my eyes landed on the "dear dad" part...
me being my self...shrugged off sleeping, continued reading and then I was like WHAT THE HECK HAPPENED?! and THAT ESCALATED WAAAAAAAY TOO QUICKLY! and also NOOOOO! JAY SHALL REMAIN NAIVE IN MY HEART!...deciding whether to continue or not since the earlier mentioned really disturbed me...hmmm...oh well, it's short anyway might as well read 'til I drop...
And that decision I did NOT regret XDDD this fic is fairly short but it was truly entertaining hahaha...now the only problem I got after i finished reading were angry glares from my dearest family who apparently were awoken but hysterical laughter that I failed to hold onto...all hell broke loose! (I was scolded to sleep afterwards...reason as to why I failed to review a tad lot earlier...told myself, I'd do it the next day, but alas...my search history got emptied...I don't have the best memory in the world)

NC
ps...I'd be more than happy to read a sequel of this if ever you'd make one

DUDE! that was awesome! write a second part! that would be awesome!