So poetic it'd be if the Winchester's story both started and ended with fire. Great writing!

Dean would just go with his brother, as he probably should have done the first time.

I certainly hope it doesn't end this way for our boys! I would much rather see them trying to save someone, and go out fighting while trying. This was very powerfully written. It made me tear up at just the thought that they could lose their war with Lucifer and Hell, by losing it mentally. I can see Dean joining Sam there though. He wouldn't be able to continue without Sam, especially now. Sam is the last, and most important, person Dean has.

Very nicely done. :)

O M G. Seriously. This was incredibly sad. You are killing me. Apparently you're not just into self punishment. Lol First of all, what John said in his journal to his wife gave me chills. Down to the bone chills. My goosebumps had goosebumps. I'm not even kidding. I honest to Chuck shivered. I don't think I'll ever, for as long as I live, forget what you wrote there. Even Mary knew they were soulmates when Sam was a brand new baby. And this whole story, really. I don't think I ever noticed before but they totally do! They look for each other the absolute second they wake up! And the four times they were separated? *sniffle* I hate those times. I can't imagine waking up all those mornings with only half of myself there. The pain and anguish for them wasn't just pyschological. It was literally a physical pain they felt. As usual, very poignant, extremely well written. Thank you so much for this and for the tears in my eyes. Seriously. Thank you. *hugs*

My heart. It hurts. This was both supremely beautiful and supremely heartbreaking. /Well done/.

God be with thee,

Eavis

Oh my gosh! Poor boys. So, so sad.

Did Dean burn himself alive with his brother or was it a metaphysical burning? I suppose not as the motel room was charred.

You didn't say what happened to them after death so I still go with the old clichéd "road trip in the sky" just to make me feel better. :)

WHOA...! *U* I have never seen this show, but dear Lord, you just made me want to see it more with this! *U* MAN, I love this fic! *U* Dear Lord, the emotion in this was absolutely stunning - I read parts over three or four times or so - and I LOVE the relationship between these boys (what I've seen on YT vids and whatnot)! *U* LOVE this SO MUCH! *U* Rock on! Man, the description, imagery, raw emotion, the BROTHERHOOD...! *U* ROCK ON! Can't wait for more from you! *U*

Did you hear that? That was the sound of my heart splintering under your powerful words. Yup. Splintering. Crushed. Reduced to dust, or in this case, ash. Very stunning, beautiful in its tragedy. I loved it!