I can definitely tell you’re British. Too many non-American colloquialisms, it’s not a bad thing, just obvious to anyone who is American. Also Finn is Kurt’s step-brother.

I'm really loving this. My favorite stories are probably 90% only Rachel and/or Quinn POVs, but there are a rare few masterpieces able to get in the heads of other characters. This is one of the best of them. I'm specifically reviewing on this chapter because I wanted to say how much I actually loved your idea of Finn's POV. I think he's a good guy, and while it's necessary to remove him from the romantic equation to ensure happiness for my OTP (because regardless of being a good guy, he's just nowhere near as right for Rachel as Quinn will always be) , I really hate when he's turned into a villain in the process. This was a really touching way to remove him and still show him in a sympathetic light.

Also, your Brittany is amazing. Spot on in terms of early Brittany, before the writers decided to treat her like it's amazing she even manages to string words together into sentences.

This was a such fun to read and even though there were moment of seriousness and heavy emotional moments it was wonderful.

Loved the Britt perspective of this chapter. she is such a fun character to read

yes

So I went back to reading this story again, because I missed faberry and the title of this fic seemed familiar and I remember being really invested in this story back in 2013, maybe? but boyy I wasn't expecting it to be so well written! I spent my glee days obsessing over this pair and reading a lot (really, I have 262 fics marked as favorites here) of fics, and as I teenager I could recognize when something was well written but sometimes I didn't care because at the time the plot is what kept me interested, from what I remember. So I'm sat here missing my favorite fictional pair, come over to my ff net account then recognize this title and start reading, only to realize this story is up there with some of my favorite books? Man, the way you characterizd Brittany in this chapter is so interesting, her insights are so casually profound, and expressed in a way only Brittany S. Pearce would have phrased things. I like the way you use what happened in canon, like right in the end with what Quinn actually said to try sto stop rachel from marrying Finn, and have someone contextualize it in the real world as we know and live in (which glee seems to keep a distance from) - we already have all these incredibly obvious signs, in canon, that Quinn is in love with Rachel and the other way around. Anyway, I hope you followed some type of literary career because you'e really good! Thank you for writing this s2

Very good!

A good read. Dug Brittany's point of view..

I loved the switch to Brittany's point of view on this chapter! :) Well done!

LMFAO Brittany leaving Quinn.

It made my heart warm when Quinn sent her that text

This story has been very angsty so far for it to be "humor & tomance"

Loved their interactions. It's so sweet of Rachel to be there during Quinn's pt sess and brave of Quinn to invite her. High-on-meds Quinn is back for a minute and she is just adorable! Judy cracked me up when she was being too obvious about how much she liked Rachel. I also can't get over some of the titles to Sue's pamphlets. Hysterical. And it's about time they share their first kiss:) So cute.

YAY! FABERRY IS ON:)

"Quinn Fabray was still in love with him." :/ I have never rolled my eyes so hard before. But I do feel bad for Finn. He's so clueless sometimes. I hope Quinn and Rachel can now stop acting like they don't love each other like that and stop wasting time.

I thought Sue was the best part of this chapter... until high-on-meds Quinn showed up. LOL. She's hilarious. I do feel bad that Rachel's feelings were hurt. She has to have known Quinn didn't mean to offend her after they've spend so much time together. *sigh*