Could you have Orion surface?

*flails in excitement* this is AWESOME!

This is so so so cool!

Me the unnamed again, sorry. Omg I just noticed you wrote something for Young Wizards and now you are my favorite person. Your tumblr is not showing up? Ok that is all I will stop now, sorry.

Oops. Previous comment was me. I do not rememver how to use this website. I do not even remember my username. This update just popped up on my email and I was like whaaa? I do not even remember who Artemis Fowl is? So I am basically also you.
That being said, kudos to you for this! It is so fascinating to read your five years later reflection, and having the courtesy to come out and declare this as lovingly unfinished is really cool. Way to have integrity!
Im also really impressed that you wrote this when you were 13/14. Who/where are you writing as now? I want to stalk your hopefully developed and gorgeous new ventures.

Lol. I too have not looked at thi1

Please, please continue this!
A highly dangerous personality might be nice, too!
And as someone who actually has Dissociative Identity Disorder, your representation of the alters is very accurate!

Oh my frond i love this story! Its really great! I hope you do more soon! :D (My fav s far is Diana teehee)

Great story!

more more

Danggg this is good! I love the whole idea (I even had the notion to write one similar to this myself, but smothered the urge since I know I would never finish it like most of my stories) and I came up with a few personas you could use if you needed some. I thought them all up when I was going to make this, but since you brought this story to life, I may as well give them to you if needed.

Ares: God of war, bloodlust, violence, manly courage, anger, courage, fertility and civil order.
In my version, his definition is: If he doesn't ignore you, he would rather kill you. Basically he can't finish a sentence off without a swear or uncouth remark or some form of rude angerism (though I don't think that's a word, but I think you get the point). Every heard of Kanda Yuu from the manga D. Gray Man? That's who's basically this one's based off of. Cold/Stoic yet still impulsive and has a fairly (very) short-temper. It's surprisingly easy to write up (and fun - in my opinion) - though hard to describe here.

Apollo: Son of Jupiter and Leto, and the twin brother of Diana (Artemis). He is the god of music, the god of healing who taught man medicine, the god of light and the god of truth, who cannot speak a lie.
Okay, with this one, I believe could be known as the extremely quiet sort of type. Doesn't talk much because - for some reason - speaks too bluntly for his own good, so he shuts his trap. However, he has this surprisingly good knack with music in general, and has memorized every single song and theory about the music subject there thus far (because of Artemis' memories - the 'original' did practically know all there was to know in the human mind).

Heracles: was a divine hero in Greek mythology, the son of Zeus and Alcmene, foster son of Amphitryon. and great-grandson (and half-brother) of Perseus. He was the greatest of the Greek heroes, a paragon of masculinity, the ancestor of royal clans who claimed to be Heracleidae and a champion of the Olympian order against chthonic monsters. Extraordinary strength, courage, ingenuity, and sexual prowess with both males and females were among his characteristic attributes. Although he was not as clever as the likes of Odysseus or Nestor, Heracles used his wits on several occasions when his strength did not suffice.
Okay, with this one, I can already tell would be pretty funny. I mean, just the NAME will bring on a weeping Artemis. Plus, if this guy's supposed to be athletic, guess what he'll be trying to do in Artemis' not-so-fit body? Of course, he still has natural instinct, but c'mon, does anyone SEE muscle on the genuis guy's arms?
But yeah, I'm too lazy to write any more now. If you want more, the yeah, go ahead an PM me. IF this was all just a waste of your time, then ignore me.

REVIEW TIME!
Yeah, I have to say, the whole story so far is good. I saw no mistakes - except maybe switch "quotations" with 'singular quotations' since that's supposed to be proper grammar and whatnot. Other than that, I think you have this whole story down good! Flow, characterization (but remember: Artemis does not say any words like 'uh' 'hmm' 'okay' and any type of urban slang. He also doesn't ever puts his sentences into simple ones either - so try using 'sophisticated' words more often with his speech. I caught a few, and I could not see Arty talking like a 'normal' person) and, with what's going on so far, the problems and such are great! It's unique, and I can't wait for your next update!

-Twinklefeather

PS: Sorry for such a long review...

i really enjoy this story. I cant wait to see what happens next, so please update soon.

Pretty good chapter. Nice and long.

I really liked this chapter. I've never seen any other Atlantis Complex fanfics include a creative side before, so it was a nice change. I don't think that the genre is bad... there isn't really any other way to say it, right? Hurt/Comfort & Humor is a great way to put it. They're helping (comfort) Artemis back together, and some of his personalities are funny to read about, like Orion and Roland, so why not?

Hooray! Or rather, gaah! Damn you Leon! That little bastard actually said that to Artemis's mother! I wanna give him a piece of my mind... oh well. Loved the chapter, it was great!

Update ASAP as per usual :)