| Reviews for CONTROL |
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   Rania760 chapter 2 . 5/12/2017 Yoo hot, too good, ou are a high imaged maker in lovemaking. To be increase! |
| ss711ssmith chapter 10 . 8/7/2015 Wow great writing. :) |
| ss711ssmith chapter 2 . 8/7/2015 Awww sweet, can feel the love John has for carter just jumping off the page. :) |
| Melle Protion chapter 1 . 6/8/2015 Hot! |
| darkbluebeauty chapter 1 . 10/27/2014 I came into the POI game rather late and I am a fan of many other couples on TV but there is something about the two of them...ugh, love this so far! |
| Smooth Doggie chapter 10 . 9/23/2014 Oh my giddy aunt!... I've never read such exquisitely written scenes as yours and I have to tell you that after 10 chapters I never imagined Anyone being able to write anything new, exciting and different - instead you completely rocked! What an amazing imagination you have or maybe you have an extremely attentive partner, the secret is all yours! Either way, if you'd been published before 'fifty yawning shades of repetitive boredom' then you'd have the whole world hooked! Smuttyness aside, you're an incredibly descriptive writer and I will be tuning back in as soon as your real life permits you to play back in the sandbox of fun with Reese and Carter. |
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/18/2014 Oh yes I really like |
| Guest chapter 10 . 2/23/2014 WOW need I say any more, you know how to write ooooo so good |
| Chakt chapter 10 . 2/17/2014 When or when are you going to update. I love love love love this story. I am in LOVE with this story. "If you asking if I would kill for you"... oh my and the smut oh my I'm so hot. PS: Not sure who that freaking ass of a human being who reviewed and said you should stop is an utter idiot. asshole guest you are a coward! If you have real guts and truly believe in your comment sign up and lets have a chat |
| Guest chapter 10 . 2/9/2014 Really enjoy your work, thanks |
| Guest chapter 8 . 2/9/2014 you really do a great job, keep it up |
| Guest chapter 4 . 2/9/2014 oh my, WHAT CAN I say |
| Guest chapter 2 . 2/9/2014 hot, hot, hot, keep writing |
| Guest chapter 1 . 2/9/2014 really like, keep writing. |
| Great writers on chapter 10 . 2/5/2014 I don't know who that complete and utter f*cktard "guest" is that wrote that ridiculously retarded review that you should stop writing but she should stop breathing and save everyone with a brain the oxygen. Seriously. It's probably some other writer who is jealous that her crap can't even come close to how good yours is. I heard you were going through some RL stuff. I just hope you have some time to spend writing again one of these days because contrary to the f*cktard guest reviewer, you SHOULD DEFINITELY KEEP WRITING. P.S. I will post this after every review that the f*cktard wrote :) Hopefully one of her buddies will pass along the info. |
