Wow.. This was pretty good! I was a bit on edge with the way you were describing things. You definitely made me feel Zoey's fear. I liked how you made the Witch unable to understand what Zoey was saying, unlike one of the fics I read. It reminded me of that movie, Warm Bodies. I like the ending too, it feels really complete, very satisfying.

No More,

No more are the days that I will
Fear for I have found a strength that
None can match and I'll push forward

Never has the blood in my viens
Flowed so fiercely as when i feel this around me
I am whole

I'm not alone
With the touch of your hand
I am whole again

I'm not alone
With the touch of your hand
I am whole again

Now I feel the passion burning
This what drives me further strengthens
My resolve to push me further
(and I believe, that I am not alone)
I'm not alone!

I'm not alone
With the touch of your hand
I am whole again

I'm not alone
With the touch of your hand
I am whole again

No more are the days that I will
Fear for I have found a strength that
None can match and I'll push forward

Now I feel the passion burning
This what drives me further strengthens
My resolve to push me further

I'm not alone (I'm not alone)
With the touch of your hand
I am whole again

I'm not alone (I'm not alone)
With the touch of your hand
I am whole again

(I am whole again)
(I am whole again)

All That Remains FTW!

This was cute and simple, I liked it a lot! :D Great job!

nice work keep it up!

Wonderful story really hope u continue this story.

Aw that was sweet, I loved how the Witch wrapped up her wounds. x3

Waaaaa! I don't want this to end.

This was amazing! I could really imagine it happening, and it completely messed up my hatred of witches (lol).