please write more i wanna know what happens next

7/10

Enjoyed reading your story!

I wonder if Reborn ever get to know his true identity.

omg.

update.

continue to update.

I cant give much of a opinion rn since it would basically be a rant but, you get the memo.

More chaps make sure tsu doesn't get hurt and also his guardians and make sure reborn doesn't betray him and if this is a couple pair make it R27

Wow, you've wrote a really amazing story here!
Your writing is good, the plot is intriguing and you've managed to make the characters, especially the guardians more three dimensional than in the Manga/Anime.
It has always bothered me how one sided the guardians are in Anime/Manga and how many FFs never really bother to change that. Including Tsuna. Gokudera and Yamamoto are as always more in the center of attention compared to for example Ryohei or Lambo but at least we see more real interaction between them and Tsuna (I could keep ranting about this issue but meh xD). Anyways, I love it.
Your approach to Tsuna is, in my opinion, very original- he doesn't come across as innocent boy with super resolve like in other FFs- he is more authentic and confident here, and still manages to be the Sky that protects and accepts all. This is when I think about it pretty amazing.

The developments in recent chapters with Mukuro and the coming Varia arc will be interesting. I wonder if Reborn will find out about Erebus because of Mukuro hmm, I can't wait to see.
I also wonder whether there will be an explanation for Reborn not being an Arcobaleno (is that written right they even exists in this world? Imaging adult Reborn is still kinda odd haha

I can't think of any critism, it was a very pleasant read. Very smooth and no glaring problem or anything.

Eh, I wish you a good day...!

amazing

Pffffffft

Mukuro's a puppy...

Thank you for writing and I eagerly await the next Chappy!

Interesting

mez has spot a mathematical incorrection. When using pronumerals that has different numbers, NEVER EVER use the same pronumeral. Otherwise, the person solving the question would immediately assume that the answer would be the same for both x's.

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BUUUUTT GOOD FIC! THIS WOULD KEEP ME UP FOR WEEKS probably.

Update please

... WELL WHAT HAPPENS NEXT MAN?! Hype. I'm kinda confused though. Tsuna was traumatized by that nightmare stuff and reborn doesn't know what happened but Tsuna just ignores it? I haven't seen the series but I've read lots of fanfiction for this series and I feel like thats strange. Like a lot of this is actually kind of strange. I feel like Hibari should "care" more (Tsundre but still caring secretly) and reborn shouldn't be so... Idk. It's just Tsuna is supposed to be so trustworthy and attractive (not in a "oh he's hot" kinda way) that Even the great Reborn can't help from feeling a little attached to the boy. Well I hope you continue the story, it is very good.

Damn Tsuna what English finesse! You are so genioso

OH MY GOD EVERYONE IS SO EMOTIONAL TODAY! Gokudera, my man. No. Stop it.
And like I ship Gokudera and Takeshi so hard tho. And Hibari X Tsuna of course