I think that the tournament should be...

Double: Two pokemon on field/One Trainer/four pokemon over all.

It sounds the best, and I'm loving the story so far.

It is alright, but I see some minor gramatical errors. for an instance, in chapter one, I found places that should have had commas. Also, this..girl, just happens to have a birthmark in the shape of a heart? thats one point on a mary sue litmus test. tsk tsk. Oh, and It was not that original that squirtel hugs michael, and michael chooses squirtel. it would have been funny though, if he rejected squirtel, the girl got the squirtel, he got bulbasaur (like in the manga), and the squirtel wants revenge on Michael. one more thing, the sentences are sort of run-ons, so you need to give them more definition, and punctuation.

Hi legendaryfairy, cool to see you are reviewing mah friend's story.

Nice chapter, I wonder who wins, or Amber or Micheal, can't wait for more.

how often will you update? I can't wait to read the second chapter!

i liked it but answer your phone!

Nice chapter...and just a question, my OC has to be of Kanto only?