So lovely! I could totally fell in love with this... Wait, I think I already did! I love how you wrote it and the feelings inside it! Perfect, beautiful work!

that was really good i liked it anyway

I really, really, really like this story. Great job with Naruto's P.O.V on all events leading 2 and ending with Pain. Very good 4 your 1st fic. I would look forward 2 any other works U post.

That was sweet. Somewhat quick but had only one typo near the end that I noticed. I liked how much he cared, and the final scene in this , Christopher Scott: A Gentleman Thief