I thought this was very, very good! Loved it!

I didn't actually read this chapter because, well, smut, but I'd be interested in reading later chapters if you ever add them. This fic seems interesting.

I think that makes her both a victim and an enabler. Arguably the second is also a kind of the first.

Fantastic story but, why does it only appear here and not in the list of fanfics you have written?

Oh my god! How sexually sadistic can you get, Sherlock? That was... Wow!

By the way, I totally understand what you mean about British actors with silly names, and jaguars hiding in cellos. don't you just want to run your fingers through his hair...

Yikes! I like how you hint that while Sherlock knows the differences between rape and sex, he can't see them when he's actually involved. The dialogue is extraordinary!

Well...! That was amazing. So, so sexy. You definitely succeeded in conveying the feelings and sensations in a very eloquent, understated way, but the RESULT was anything but understated! Quite the contrary: your style really made me connect with the characters and experience what they were going through, right along with them.

Speaking of characterisation, it was flawless. In just two brief chapters you portray them impeccably, especially in terms of what their driving motivations might be in this situation. They are totally plausible, and make this scenario completely believable as a result. At the beginning of chapter 2, I really felt for Sherlock going through what he had, so that even if he's not necessarily being fair in his actions, you can really sympathise with his character. And besides that stated motivations, you showed that you definitely 'get' him through lots of little things, like that Sherlock is a very tactile person. Very good insight! Those little details really add to the scene.

Overall I absolutely loved it! I'm so glad I was able to learn about it through you/Sherlolly, because it's a total standout. I've read about this situation before it other stories, but this is probably my favourite so far. I think it's because you focused so much on the characters and their thoughts and feelings (which I like to do in my writing too :)

GREAT job, and now I'm off to read Helpless!

Really loved it! Great idea! I read your 'Helpless' first and then followed your advice and read this one. Loved them both, great to see the darker side of Sherlock emerge and a differnt take on the Sherlock/Molly relationship. Please update soon! I want to know what happens especially from Sherlock's POV :)

Predatory Sherlock is certainly enthralling to read.

This is incredibly well-written and fun to read. Please continue. :)

oh please post it ASAP, cant wait!

Hey! I feel so honoured to be mentioned :P

Anyway... I think you handled the characters very well! I don't really read a lot of smut fics so I'm not sure if everyone writes like that:)

Perhaps the anonyomity of everything made it better...

I love this fanfic. Please write more! You are definately going on my author favs and alerts.

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:)

Definetly got the humor. No it wasn't cheesy. I thought it was realistic. It was so realistic that I have to go rest now.

yes, yes, yes, yes and yes! Great smut and Great characters and all Great! really Good. more please?

This was great! The build is just perfect and I love Molly's little moments of "wait, is this really happening?" breaking through in there too.