Awww I love Monroe so much.

Okay I don’t mean to get medical or critical but if you’re coughing blood you need a hospital not tea. You can’t cough your throat bloody, maybe a little raw but not blood. I’ve had to research that for my own writing and my mum who’s a nurse was also helpful.

Awwww. That’s sweet!

Just the opposite, Nick. Monroe wouldn’t leave you for that.

Oh oof. Nick’s parents died young and I bet he has abandonment issues because of it which makes the Juliet thing worse. My parents split when I was two and I have horrible abandonment issues because of it.

Oooh I hate her. I mean I never liked Juliet from the beginning but this, yikes man.

I love Monroe.

Oh man I haven’t read for these two since 2013 or 2014, I just jumped back into fanfic because my crush is watching Grimm with me and I got excited over Monroe and Nick. I had to restart from the beginning because I don’t remember what happened last oops, I don’t remember kids so ima sailing they’re ocs or fanon characters.

I just... love the dominant monroe. I love this story. Ill read the rest of your stuff now. love it.

Wow, that was intense! I loved it! I wish it were longer, I wanted to keep reading it! I loved that Juliet was a b*tch and was soon expelled from Nick's life. I am new to this fandom, I haven't even finished the first season yet but Monroe and Nick fit so much better than Nick and Juliet. I really hope you have written some other Grimm fics with this pairing!

aww sweet

I liked the fic is very cute kisses

Love it!
Hope u continue(:

Terrific story, good development, tiny continuity error in chapter 2 that was a bit disturbing for me. Juliet confronts Nick about changing his phone number "She showed up at my house this morning...". A bit later, Holly stops this confrontation; "The young Blutbad had gone to Nick's house to pick him up for dinner...". I don't generally have dinner in the morning, at best it is the midday meal. It almost sounds as if Juliet had been beating up on Nick for 4 to 8 hours before Holly got there. Just wanted to make you aware if nobody else has mentioned it.

Awww! I loved this! It was very cute.

Peace, love, and all that shit...
Sasodeiizawesome

AWWWWWWWWWESOME!

oh, i loved this. so hot and cute *.* it really made me smile a lot. thanks for that.

Great story :)