i really liked this! it was a great little tid-bit story and very well written. i love the little snip-it about the socks.

Niice, II loved iit! II can't waiit two read more of your 2toriie2!

I don't normally review fanfiction, because I'm not personally a writer so I figure I have no idea what I'm talking about. But I felt like I just had to tell you this was fantastic. You used lots of extended vocabulary, that most NSFW writers seem to forget about, and you managed to call attention to things other than sex without bringing attention away from the overall fact that they're having sex. I know you posted this a while ago but I just wanted to say bravo on porn done right.

*faints from massive bloodloss* Amazing; flat out amazing! I'm so adding this to my collection! /_

Very well written. I have no idea what the sock title refers to, but the rest of the story was very good :D Keep writing!

-Emma

Very interesting story though I found the whole socks thing to be kind of randomly placed, like the whole thing would have flowed better without it or if it was expanded on but other than that fabulous job!

Poison