Interesting.

It somehow felt a little rushed to me at some parts and there were a few typos then and there but I'm not complaining since the epilogue left me speechless beyond words. Love the twist and turns, the drama and everything- it was somewhat depressing yes, but one thing about life is that it doesn't always turn out simply for the best. I wouldn't have this ended in a different way.( then again, I feel really bad for everyone, especially Arthur and Alfred)
It was powerful, thought evoking and a hell lot creepy in more ways than one with your avid descriptions and eveything and I love it. Was glued to my screen the whole time. It was fun while it lasted. Thank you for sharing this. Now I'm off to check your other works. Kudos! ~

Love!

... and I'm crying. You did this.
*sobbing under blanket, still scared of DarkArthur*

I didn't expect ending like that and that's precisely why it's brilliant!

Holly shi...! I'm really scared right now and it's because of your fantastic way of writing. I'm easy scared, like Alfred. My friend made me watch "Grudge" five or more years ago and I still have nightmares. And now, when I thought I found nice drama fic, when I was expecting crimes of normal people, I'm scared beyond my mind. Heck! I'm scared what may or may not be behind my laptop cover. I'm alone in the dark flat, with huge need to go to bathroom and I can't. Because she - or I should say HE, because I'm now equally scared of DarkArthur - may be waiting there.

And it's all because you're such a good mood maker/writer.

[It's the longest review that I've ever written!]

Creepy as he'll, but good

That was amazing!
I really loved the beginning and how I did not know if it was magic or if Arthi used something else to control everyone.
And thanks for telling Arthis backgroundstory because I really hate it if a character is messed up like that without an explanation.
And well I really loved your story! It was really entertaining
Oh and the last chapter with Peter that was really creepy anx just so amazing! I love it!

I-It's over... Somehow, that makes me feel a bit sad.

Still, loved your story! I don't what else to say that I haven't said before in my past reviews except: SEQUEL

Will you be doing one? No? Oh well... it was still nice while it lasted.

Tragedy never to be escaped from. Sorrow and hate that will always blind. A bully trapped forever in the cold snow. A soul dipped in darkness to be tormented and hurt for all of time. And one hero who ended up not being able to save anyone. And now a house made living from all the memories and pain it was baptized in.

The tale is over, and it was a great way to end it, :D

I loved this story.

Thank you for the wonderful update.

Not just from me, but from all the readers as well; we would love to see how Arthur and Alfred's life went. It's kinda hard to imagine how he got the collar and did stuff happen? I wish it wasn't so rushed but... never the less, better than nothing!

You know what would be nice? A sequel. Will you be doing one perhaps? It will be VERY interesting, especially after "The Cottage."

This was a really appropriate smut scene. All from Arthur's point of view and filled with desperation and self-delusion. We as the audience had no idea if Alfred really enjoyed himself or not because for Arthur it wasn't necessary. Oh, I'm not saying that Alfred isn't important to Arthur, but he's not important as a friend, partner, and lover. Alfred is more a living symbol to Arthur. A living object that Arthur clings to so that he can feel safe, like a life jacket. Psychologically speaking, Alfred is basically a living fantasy, not a person. Arthur's lust for Alfred is not concerned with Alfred enjoying himself really. Ah, let me clarify: it would be nice if Alfred enjoyed himself because it is sexy to a lot of people if their lover is enjoying the sex too, but for Arthur this is his wet dream come to life. And wet dreams don't concern themselves with the fantasy lover's enjoyment.

Anyway, great story. Awesome scene.

Waaaaaaah