That... was really well written! You managed to convey your meaning here perfectly and got the characterisation just right.

A worthy addition to my favourites tab. :D

I love a overprotective and possesive Bee. No idea why but its the best. I wonder if there are any other fics with overprotective or a possesive Bee...

When I think of the best transformer fics, I think of this one. I'm seriously in love with your perspective on the transformers. Amazingly creative and unique! I wish I could set an atmosphere like yours, it's like its own experience.

Ooooohhh I like this a lot

Blinks...wow...That was just ... wow! I loved it! very insightful and very well thought out, I really liked it! great job!

i'm also seeing this from bee's POV, that Sam is so undeniably human and will die sooner or later so he's gonna spend as much time as physically possible with him now...
damn you got me all deep thinking and what not
Wonderfully written

that was an interesting take on their relationship to each other

Bad ass... I never much liked Ron anyway. Very well written.

Wow...

Touches the right emotional chords without it being too much one way or the other. There are so very few stories that address this and it is excellently written.

There are always some growing pains when parents realize that they aren't the most important person in their child's life and the kids don't need them the way they once did. But sometimes parents need to ask for time with their kids to do something fun with them, like fishing, playing games, or just watching a movie, when they are teenagers, even if the kids roll their eyes, whatever, to maintain a connection with them. It's important to get a sense of how the kid is doing and in later years the kid will appreciate that time.

It also leaves me wondering if Ron is reading things right because is it in his pov. Is it just a bit of jealousy seeing himself replaced or has Bee really taken the place Ron thinks he has and with deliberation? Ron may simply not be able to read the interactions with an alien being as he would another human and is terrified of the world his son may be increasingly pulled into, which we know does occurr. If Ron is right, it definitely presents a more complex character of Bee.

Wow, Bee's kinda' lost it, huh? Reminds me of one of your 'what ifs' in another fanfic of yours, where he really loses it.

God, this fanfic made me cry it was so amazing! Especially at this part:

" Guys just didn't do scared.

Especially not dads; dads couldn't be scared of anything. They had to be tough. They had to be able to beat up the monster under the bed and send it crying for its mommy. They had to be the one thing their kid could depend upon come hell or high water. And that kind of job description didn't leave any room for being scared.

If he couldn't protect his son from dark shadowy things lurking in the closet, who would?"

But what makes me cry even more is the lack of updates on Instability! The normal version! What's up with that one? Have you discontinued it? Please let us now if you have!

A very original take - and very well done :-)

Wow. This was really good! Love it!

That was chilling. The moment I read the word 'Mine' I got goosebumps all over. Poor Ron...