I guess after a 5 year break, you aren't going to finish this. I love that you have Indy in there, a dear friend wrote an Indiana Jones story many decades back.

I too, have always loved the Phantom. I wish I could come up with a plot for a story, but I guess I'd probably also be more interested in the next generation of the Ghost Who Walks. I know he had twins, and I'm guessing that they both became Phantoms, at least I'm guessing from what I remember of some story set in the 1960's. It may well be a couple of more generations of Ghosts since then. I can see him with a super computer in his cave...

My only real beef would be the spelling. "Week" instead of "weak" and "artefact" instead of "artifact" are just two of the ones that really stumbled my enjoyment of the start of the story.

Well written needs expansion on the suits

Interesting idea for a cross over. You have some editing to do to make this perfect but your idea is a solid one. Can't wait to read the rest

I think it's good. I like the Phantom. The pace is a little slow for my taste, but still good. Good luck to you.

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It is great to see that The Phantom has a category here now, but I am curious to know why you refer to the evil mark as 'The Fourth Skull' when it has only ever been referenced as such in the movie starring Billy Zane.

well done! Keep writing!

How exciting to discover a category for The Phantom! I love the 1996 movie starring Billy Zane. Sadly, I’m not as familiar with the comics as I wish to be…they are not often stocked at my local comics shop (and they sure aren’t cheap anymore, hehe).

You are off to a great start. I’m eagerly looking forward to discovering what happened to Horton and what new trouble is stirring in the Bengalla jungle. I do hope you will continue on. It’s about time the Ghost Who Walks gets a completed story on this site. :-)

If I may offer one bit of constructive criticism, keep an eye out for the typos. I noticed a few such as incompetant/incompetent and righ/right. Looking forward to the next update!