Reviews for Deserted Distractions
serena.jones.585 chapter 61 . 2/12
Trying not to cry. Wish I was there to tell Anzu what she lost. But who would believe that story? I fell in love but the evil spirit made me forget? If Bakura had any kindness, he would have taken
serena.jones.585 chapter 8 . 2/11
His hard angles, her curves. A writer familiar with the human body. Squee! Oh God. So good.
serena.jones.585 chapter 12 . 2/11
Old person music? Oh, Bakura sweetie, listen to the lyrics. This was written for you. 'You are all I long for. All I worship and adore.'
serena.jones.585 chapter 1 . 2/11
I was hesitant to read this. Anzu stories can be bad. Too weak, too cloying, or too desperate to get away from thr cannon "friendship queen". And too many writers think Ryou should be a doormat. Plus it's 61 chapters. BUT the is BLA. I took a deep breath and clicked. Half a page in, and I am hooked! My anticipation of writing as a craft grows with the school waiting for a snow day. 6hr rehersal? Been there, done that. Already I'm identifying with the girl that usually annoys me. So the rest of my life is on hold until I finish this. Thank you, BLA!
Jaying123 chapter 61 . 1/10
This is awesome
The story characters are also good
Expect you to write a lot Yami bakura x anzu
ryou x anzu
MakaylaCO chapter 61 . 1/9/2019
I literally sat in one position for almost 3 hours reading this one story non-stop. Fucking LOVE it!
Guest chapter 61 . 6/1/2018
I am sooooo happy to have found this fic! I seriously couldn't put my phone down coz it was just goddamned good. Great job! :3 I hope u make more of these!
Naraku's Phoenix chapter 61 . 1/18/2018
NOOOOOOOOOO! MY HEART! ACK! I binged read everything since I first stumbled on your story. It was so good, but that ending punched me in the feels. I hope they find happiness after this. You're a wonderful writer.
feedthegrimmjows chapter 61 . 9/2/2017
I loved this story so very much. Thank you so much for sharing your work. :)
An outdated meme chapter 50 . 2/26/2017
That was amazingly written. I don't want to sound like a pervert, but that was beautiful.
An outdated meme chapter 21 . 2/25/2017
Bakura is being mean! XD. I really like this story!
Azure Shine chapter 59 . 1/21/2017
i think this is good story, too bad about the ending. no spark at all. i enjoy both shipping as vex an ryou x tea. please erased bad review from your review box. i sure it make our eyes hurt.
ladypennywise chapter 6 . 12/30/2016
*Screams* OH GOD, I JUST LOVE THIS CHAPTER TOO MUCH.
I'm so happy because my OTP finally kissed! Ryou and Anzu are such a sweet couple :)
Amazing!
Yukiji Yumemiru chapter 1 . 12/15/2016
I just stay awake all nigth to read. Its amazing, you make a great job with the characters, specially Yami Bakura. Also i really love how you take the rhythm of the stories, slow and very well described... You look in the details, the timing of all. With all the craziness they still have comun sense. The end... was logic, but still break my hearth. I feel most of the story that Ryou was indeed a depress person with a hard life and he end with his hearth broken. Life is cruel not? Good job, im going to search more of your work.
Anonymous chapter 1 . 10/22/2016
TEA IS NOTHING! SHE'S NOTHING AT ALL! BAKURA WOULDN'T EVEN HAVE THE NERVE TO LOVE UP ON THIS SPOILED ROTTEN BRAT! INCLUDING HAVING SEX WITH HER! BLECH! WHAT KIND OF GUY WOULD EVEN WANT TO HAVE SEX WITH AN ANNOYING GIRL LIKE HER?! I KNOW BAKURA WOULDN'T! YES I'VE READ ALL 61 chapters and DESERTED FUCKING DISTRACTIONS IS STILL HORRIBLE EVEN THE SEX SCENES! THIS IS WHY I DON'T EVEN READ IT ANY LONGER! I WOULDN'T DARE GO TO THIS FREAKING STORY TO READ HOW HORRIBLE IT WAS! TEA AND BAKURA?! REALLY?! I HATE ALL SHIPPINGS REGARDING BAKURA NOT ONLY THIS PIECE OF CRAP! EVERY SINGLE CHAPTER IS LITERALLY HORRIBLE! I CAN SEE TEA WITH YUGI/THE PHARAOH BUT NOT THE SPIRIT OF THE RING! DO YOU KNOW THAT TEA DOESN'T EVEN LIKE BAKURA?! ALL SHE DOES IS TALK OVER AND OVER AND OVER ABOUT THE PHARAOH AND I REALLY GET SICK OF LISTENING TO THAT! TEA IS STUPID ANNOYING AS HELL AND CRIES OVER THE PHARAOH LEAVING HER! I GET TIRED JUST BY HEARING HER VOICE AND READING THIS GARBAGE AND OTHER PEOPLES' STUPID 'VEXSHIPPING' STORIES AND STORIES REGARDING TEA IN IT!
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