This was a pleasure to read. Deep, subtle, the kind of story that moves you, gives you a chill, makes you think. Thanks for writing this.

The characterization in this reaches a rare perfection; Auron's interaction with Tidus was a joy to read. The mood, the atmosphere, and the subtlety of it are admirable as well. Definitely a favorite.

fic love. I'm sorry I can't be more coherent. Just.. fic love.

I read this before on your website, but now I've decided to post up a review on your account of it. .

I really love the style you used for the writing. Very cool and dream-like. Your characterization was awesome too. Everything from dialoge to the little details you put into the character's actions and thoughts... all in all, I found this a highly enjoyable read.

You're a very talented writer. Keep up the good work!

That was really lovely - and creepy, as was already mentioned, but in that way that gives you pleasant little shudders. I wish I could give some constructive criticism, but I really can't think of any; it was very lyrical and very thought-provoking to someone who has played through the game and thought too much about Zanarkand and what it is, exactly.

Uh... well, that was creepy. In the really, really good way that the whole concept was in the first place. Yay.