awesome.

Nice!

Me too. I mean, I hope so too. That I see you again…sometime…trooper Corr." she seemed to cringe at herself, and Corr held back a laugh

They cute.

! Ordo!

Ofta, starting us out with the FEELS aren’t you

Thoroughly enjoyed the whole story (and I read it when I should have been working, but oh well). I have to say that Maze moonlighting as Batman definitely made for a different type of Clone Wars story. Loved revisiting the RC series through your writing.

I'm really glad I found this story. I really enjoyed it. Thank you so much for not killing Etain! I love how you captured the characters, really good job.

*soft gasping* awwwwwwwwell, overall it was a very well written story. pacing was good, plot was good, and it was interesting enough to make me impatient to wait until i had time to read the next chapter. however, some things i wanted to point out:
1. some OOC moments. this was bugging me as i was reading it. particularly your characterization of kal and maze. i dont know if kal would have been quite so welcoming to zey, but maybe it's just a corcumstance change that caused the differences in this story vs. canon. with maze, idk it feels almost like a vague sort of "too fast" feeling. the changes in his character were so sudden and instantaneous after that kiss w/ aerin. also, some of the thoughts were a bit different than what i personally thought would be characteristic for certain characters. (unfortunately, i cant find them... sorryim trying i promise)
2. vocab (? that might not be the right word to describe it). scattered around the story is this tendency to spell out contractions in dialogue and character thoughtd, like saying "it will" instead of "it'll", or "he is" instead of "he's". it interrupts the flow of the sentence and makes it sound a lil bit awkward and stilted, as well as distracting to me personally when im reading. 3. paragraphs with dialogue. when you write dialogue, i cant help but notice that you put actions of the person who's speaking BEFORE he/she says what needs to be said. ofc this is great and helps w the flow but you keep putting the actions of the person whos speaking in the previous paragraph, and then starting the dialogue in the next para. this makes it confusing to me bc i have to figure out whos speaking. for example, chapter 16, when they mention that a'den is coming over. it's not immediately clear that it's parja saying "we all help. dont worry." bc the action that would normally tell the reader this is put in the previous paragraph. as a reader, im immersing myself in the story and paragraph phrasing is important for me to be able to immediately identify who's spraking. 4. mereel's heartache. when you first started to introduce mereel's problems w/ ordo being comatose and his lack of a stable relationship, i thought it was an amazing and incredibly insightful idea. however, as the story progressed, i started to see less and less of it until it resurfaced suddenly in capter 19. i would love to see that explored more in the story. and that, i think, concludes the end of my criticism. ofc, take it all w/a giant grain of salt. I'm no literary expert, so go with your gut. that said, thank you so so so much for writing repcom. theres just never enough rc fics around!i love your writing and i look forward to seeing more of it!

I just finished the baby scene and i almost cried im sorry it's 1 in the morning and I'm bizarrely emotional

omfggggggg im so happy you let etain live i could hug you rn thank you

Seriously love this story. Reading it again actually.

Oh! my! God! I cried like a baby. Awesome. What a beautifully written chapter!

This is one of the best storys i think ive read on this site whenever I wasnt hoping ordo would wake up i was laughing my shebs off at mereel god he is funny its beyond awesome that you let aerin live i was about to hate u. and etain that was epic (damn u traviss) i love the whole story and it is beyond amazing that u included delta even better that u broight sev back i honestly can say that i loved this writing and i found nothing wrong with it. absolutely fenominal job and i will be honest there were some parts were i felt like crying thanks for a good read

Out-freaking-standing. The best RepComm fic I've ever read

FEEEEELS! Lol ...wait...there's more?

Ok the noes are gone. Hooray! Dear Karen Traviss...this is what SHOULD have happened!