| Reviews for Bearing Fruit |
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StormRaven333 chapter 1 . 1/24/2013 Oh, that IS a good one! XD ...cauldn't stop laughing! Darkrai 1 Cresselia 0 heheheh XD |
not someone of importance chapter 1 . 1/9/2013 I love Darkrai here Faved |
ASiriusWriter01 chapter 1 . 10/16/2012 why cant other stories have darkrai like this? |
forevercurious chapter 1 . 8/2/2012 Haha! That was good |
psychicshipping chapter 1 . 3/1/2012 good laugh :) I needed that. |
chaotic-iak chapter 1 . 3/1/2012 So Darkrai got Cresselia fooled? Uh I don't actually understand :P The plot, as I said, is not really clear; I'm not sure whether Darkrai actually caused problem or only fooled Cresselia. But otherwise well done. Linguistic has the usual capitalization of "Pokemon" issue (well now the word, not any particular species), which you may argue to no end. Otherwise, all fine. As a whole, the story is fun. Darkrai seems different (and yeah, OOC), but I guess that's not a big problem. Last thing... Apicot? Guess I don't know the Berries. Or otherwise it's a misspelling of Apricorn, but it's too different. Well no matter. So, good story, interesting enough to kill some time. Not meant to kill Dialga. Good luck with your fanfic writing journey! |
Tanon chapter 1 . 2/29/2012 Had a pretty good laugh with the ending. Darkrai is OOC, but that's the whole point, isn't it? :D Neat idea. |