Such an amazing story! Your writing is absolutely incredible.

Oh goodness, that was fantastic

OMG so utterly awesomely smutty _ wow I loved it. I always love a good forceful and dominant Sherlock and this was spectacular )

Sheesh! Is it me, or is it really hot in here! I had to stop myself squeaking, because i'm reading this on my phone, in my classroom, surrounded by people.

Wow. I loved this. If only sex in real life was this good! ;)

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Not going to lie,I read reviews before storys and your descriptions really wasn't for me but I gave the first sentances a try and now I'm happy I did! I just couldnt get enough and stand and clap louldy for people to read and find out what the fuss is about.

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love

-Gole

Epic please continue

~NH

Loved this :)

It's written so well and in character

Thanks for uploading!

I really did like this, even though I'm not usually a fan of top!Sherlock. It was pretty steamy. My only critique would be that you used the word 'scrabbling' pretty often.

Brilliant!

My God, I think I had an eyegasm from reading this. It was incredible. I don't think my blush will ever fade. XD

And THAAAAAAANK YOOOOOOOOU for keeping them in character! When they're out of character, it bugs the hell outta me. I don't have any tips for you, since you have writing smut (and writing in general, apparently) down pat. :)

I give this a 10 out of 10 stars! 3