Love this story, this is my second time coming back to it. I hope it’ll be continued!

The unstoppable force and an immovable object...Imagine MeYou...great movie

The unstoppable force and an immovable object...Imagine MeYou...great movie

Thoroughly enjoying your story sofar, thank you!

I love this story and I need a continuation. please continue

I absolutely love your writing and was overcome with joy when I saw that you updated it. If you need anything let me know. I didn’t really see the movie reference sadly but can’t wait for more. My Discord is Edgar_Fowl#0885 my Tumblr is SavageSnek and my Twitter is EdgarFowl. You can find me there if interested. Thank you for writing such amazing works and still being active.

More please

You have grown as a person and a writer, your writing proves that. It doesn't need to be jovial all the time, I think the last chapter had a good balance, plus the storyline has become much more compelling. Keep it up!

I have just finished reading that last chapter and being all crazy about not knowing how it will continue, and being that although I have just found about your wonderful stories, I would like to know if you would want to speak with me about that of a beta. I have never been one and English is not my first language either but if you would consider me it would be awsome.
Bye!

OMG what a wonderful binge read. I have loved it. Funny and then very caring, very sexy. Then that hint of danger. I loved the ring scene.

Thanks for updating. Awesome

Hmm...I personally found this really squicky (this isn't super my type of story but I know you wanted people to review it on the review fest) so I'm not sure what constructive I can say about it without that coloring my judgement. A teacher punishing a student out of sexual jealousy like that really shouldn't be portrayed as romantic - I think the Minerva/Hermione pairing would be stronger if it felt arrived at more fairly.
Again, though, the SPAG was good. And this is of course my opinion. I'm just not sure how to give concrit on a fic so contrary to my tastes.

I'll be honest I don't really like teacher/student, though that doesn't change the quality of the story. I do like that you waited until Hermione was overage for any real reciprocation though. I felt the characterization though was a bit odd - Minerva getting jealous over a student's affair?. Your SPAG and flow was good though.

And this chapter is even smoother, characterization wise. And I'm still laughing about poor kitten Minnie!

I think this chapter is a lot smoother characterization wise. And the image of Minerva and her classroom was funny.