this is the best lotf fic I've ever read, the symbolism is absolutely flawless. wg should let you babysit the island more often.

Thank God, this story is literally over. Because going through a few unfinished masterpieces is beyond my strength. Thanks for the story, lovely author!

It was beautifully written and I loved it.
I love this story and I hope this isn't the end... Oh w8 I think it is... Dangit

I've been reading this, and I LOVE IT!
Can I post fanart of it if I give credit?

i know it's been absolutely so long, but i love this! the amount of emotions i went through. i find this story to be so true to the novel. if you happen to read this, please consider writing an epilogue!

This is the fic I never knew I needed for this book.

Oml this fanfic is just amazing xD i love it so much! Probably one of the best ones ive read, and ive read a lot xD kudos to you (:

Damn son
This story was so good, and now the feels are too real D:
ok have a nice day :D

I loved this story, just wish it was longer. Would've loved to see what happened afterwards.

Hmm, not a very happy ending I'd say. I don't think they'd appreciate slash in the world at this time. Humm~ Ne?

Lol, men and their guns.

Yeah...Ralph, I hope you change your mind when you find out what they've done.

Lol, spiders, right? Geez, I love that kid.

*LOUD SCREECHING*
OKAY THIS STORY WAS JUST SO PERFECT AND WELL THOUGHT OUT AND WRITTEN SO BEAUTIFULLY AND DESCRIPTIVELY LIKE AN ACTUAL NOVEL OH MY GOSH IT WAS BEAUTIFUL I LOVED YOUR PORTRAYAL OF RALPH AND HIS INSANITY, DREAMS AND NIGHTMARES AND SAMNERIC WERE LITERALLY THE SWEETEST THING EVER AND THE PLOT WAS SO AMAZING AND I CAN'T EVEN BEGIN TO PINPOINT WHAT ELSE. THIS ENTIRE STORY MAKES ME FEEL A WHOLE VARIETY OF EMOTIONS AND IT WAS AMAZING FROM START TO FINISH.

This was absolutely amazing! Please make a sequel where Ralph and Jack live together happily! They learn to fix themselves and help each other. I'm so glad I got to read this! It was amazing!