I'm only 12 so all this seems a little full on to me and I can't make much sense of it all all really but I am absolutely in love with the lied and jasmine love story, I just think you went a little too far. Never the less it was a good story not that I finished it because I was a little scared to find out what happens!

nnnOOOOOO omg what an end? I really love the story you've come up with and I love the little makeshift family that Tori, Dan and Nic have made - really great fic, a shame it's unfinished xx

It was good but try not to make a story end with a cliffhanger okay, but it was great!

Please I love this story! Finish it! For the low of god!

good gooooood

Very Creepy! Want more soon!112222222222288888888888888888888

I just read this whole thing in one go! You have to update! I am dying to read more! :D :D :D :D :D
This is definitely going on my favourites list!

I love the way you've written the nightmare parts! It seriously creates a sense of fear for the readers! You have a lot of talent! :D

I'm only up to chapter 3 but if just have to say so far this is Sooooo cute! !:D

Oh my gosh! I have been dying waiting for the next chapter. Please write it whenever you can. I am a desperate loving fan here. - Deltorian!

Liefjasmine forever!

Please continue, I can't wait to see what happens!

Nice chap once again! :) Truly, I wish I could write like, you. :)

Haha nice cliffy. I cant wait to see if Nic will kill him or not. Lol.

Just check your mistake, but your story's great!