I think this is the first Brynjolf/Dragonborn fic I have read where there's a cat fight. It was a nice touch and a suitable reaction for such a dominant character. Over all I enjoyed it and found it well written as well as highly entertaining.

Fiona is such a barbaric beast.

oh was fun,warm,sexy and greaaaaaaaaaaaat!

ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh gooooooooooooooooooooooooddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddd

Thank you. . . Thank you, a lot. . . (This is not sarcasm).

hot and sweet! well done!

carleen

This was really hot! And the jealousy angle was a fun way to start it.

Oh. My. Gods...

I seriously love Karliah, but you nearly had me having second thoughts on how I feel about her character. You played that out so damn well, and you had me raging just as much as Fiola.

And... wow. I'm glad this went the way it did. I'm sitting here sniggering and blushing like a virgin (it's a damn shame that we all can't have our own little Brynjolf).

Kudos to you :D

Brynjolf sneaking through the streets of Riften with Fiola in his arms is really a sexy scene

I found this story very beautiful, full of humor but also of passion and attraction explosive! Fantastic your Fiola, she captured her Brynjolf!

Review love granted. I adore this piece; it's funny and cute. :D

Oh god, that was amazing. Brynjolf was so in character and I just loved it. Karliah seemed off until you explained it was a set-up. However, I enjoyed the whole thing.

Very nice story! I loved the bit about the karliah-cicle! Very funny!
And I happen to think that this one-shot was not terribly long. I like a bit of backstory! Again, awesome story!

Whew, that was sexy! Good God, now I'm never gonna be able to look at Brynjolf the same way again!
Hey, do you think you can do something like that with Marcurio? I've been trying to for the longest time but I keep getting pulled away from it cuz of homework... Out of good hearted charity, of course!

Awww I was waiting for karliah to get jealous…); awesome story!