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xxMiss Lizxx chapter 3 . 4/15/2012 Nice story. Hope you can continue this soon :) |
Simon wanna be chapter 2 . 3/24/2012 Well I figured that she might be pregnant...I mean I don't eat pickles with peanut butter...it's nasty! But all kidding aside, I don't think Alvin could be a teacher...he's much to wild and crazy for that kind of mundane and boring life. I could see Simon as a college professor or teacher but not Alvin. 47 test strips...is that like a world record or something? I mean that would be a marathon for peeing! I can't even begin to imagine how much fluid she had to drink to pee that much! I thought Alvin was going to go down on one knee and pop the question and that's why she would be planning an engagement party for her self...but Alvin is too dumb to do that. I am sure it would have made Brittany shoot through the roof with joy and happiness and get him out of hot water. But I guess he's still a little to slow for that. I am not surprised that the gum didn't hide the fact that he was smoking...I don't think I can see Alvin smoking I really don't! But I guess he's the most likely of them all to smoke. |
Simon wanna be chapter 1 . 3/24/2012 ALVIN! Why did you have to open your big fat mouth? I mean seriously when will you learn to shut up and stop pushing people's buttons? I liked how Simon says "I lied", it is exactly like something a brother would do to help his sibling out...even if he makes you want to strangle him at times. I am glad that Simon was there for him. So what exactly does Simon do to help pay for the apartment? I am assuming that he has a job or something. I would like to know. But then again I guess I will find out later on in the story. I think you did a good job. There were a few errors here and there but nothing to major. I wonder what Brittany is going to do to Alvin when he gets home. And way to go Jeanette for throwing him out and making him face his girlfriend. I liked how Simon let Jeanette throw him out and he didn't do a thing to object. I bet it felt good to see Alvin get tossed out! |
Esmeia chapter 2 . 3/10/2012 I'm so sorry for taking so long to review! ;.; But you know I'll always review sooner or later! :D I loved this chapter! I always find hormonal, pregnant woman to be so funny to watch/draw/write about. XD Poor Alvin and Brittany! And, OMG, Theo's about to ask Ellie to marry him! I hope she says yes, I can't see her refusing. :D Can't wait for the next chapter! |
The More Loving One chapter 2 . 3/6/2012 :D Love, love, love, love, love, and love. |
The Chipette Protector chapter 2 . 3/6/2012 What will happen next? I wonder what Brittany will do? I can't wait to find out! |
Scarlet Rabbit chapter 1 . 3/1/2012 LMAO Alvin is hiding from Brittany that is to funny. |
Esmeia chapter 1 . 2/28/2012 Pickles and peanut butter? OMG. XD Poor Alvin, I'd be scared to go back to an angry Brittany too! Can't wait for the next chapter! |
The Chipette Protector chapter 1 . 2/26/2012 What will happen to Alvin when he gets home? Is Brittany going to kill him? I can't wait to find out! |