I'm CRYING I HOPE YOU'RE HAPPY

Dude your a jerk this made me cry and while I'm generally a rather apathetic person this really hit th nail on its head, so sad your a good writer

I know it's two years since but...It's the most saddest sweetest thing I've ever read! You literally made me cry!

Beautiful, just... beautiful!

I feel like I've read this and reviewed before... I think I'm crying... thanks :( Good writing.

i swear i am literally crying

Kura: *drowning herself in the corner with her tears*

Berry: ...TT...I-I...love how...Z-Zack said...h-his l-last words..TT

Kura: I don't wanna hear it. Zack never died. It's just a story. A beautifully sad story but still just a story...TT

Berry: Still, we loved it :) So beautiful...TT Stupid car! Why you mess up their lives!

Kura: WAH! TT

I'm not crying...theres just some onions in here..*clutches tissue box* DAMN ONIONS"

I am bawling.

You made my cry D: But soo good.

I seriously teared up at this. ;-;

This was fantastically sad.

wow... sorry im too lazy to log in but wow... normally i dont cry when i read sad stories im not heartless i just cant relate to stuff like that. i have an older brother not my twin hes two years older hes not dead but he made that same promis to me. i started thinking about what it would be like if i lost him forever. you did a great job on the story i never would of guessed i would cry from it. keep writing :)

I cried! So beautiful!

OHMAIGAWD! This is one of the SWEETEST stories I've EVER read! I cried... ;.;

Sad :..-( but good story.