I'm sorry, I just found out your other Portal stories, and just saw you described all the events described in Keepsake on them! Glad to see you wrote more about that universe! *goes off to read more*

Thank you for this lovely fic. I like your version of Caveline. I like you you only suggest pasts events (i.e. Chell escaping Aperture for the last time) and we have the freedom to imagine how those developed. I also liked how Cave had to face the consequences of all his past mistakes. The only problem I had is that I sometimes had trouble identifying who was talking at times, Caroline or GLaDOS. But, aside that little detail, I enjoyed this fic a lot. Thank you!

:'D SO BEAUTIFUL!

YES! There's even Chelley in this story! this is AMAZING!

FINALLY! a Caveline story with the plot of Chell being their daughter. perfection at its finest.

Oh, I really love the idea of this story. And I'm IN love with the fact that you place Chell as their daughter. Not many people agree with that theory, but I myself love it. I just wish she could've met her 'parents'. D:

AAAAHHH YOU BROKE MY HEART. Nonetheless, I love it. Brilliant, Toni, just brilliant. Keep going.

Wow, really cool idea! Please update, I'd like to see where this goes. Weird pairing, though...

An alright story! I'd like to see an update.

You might want to add that its part of your other fan fics it really steams me off that I thought I was finally rid of more Brenna even if it is just a mention or two hnnng.

But I did like this its original. But where'd those doctor guys come from? Im assuming they're human but a little more explanation would be nice. And wowowowoowowowoowowowooooow that ending. That's all im going to say for now.