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Still crying! THIS WAS SO SAD BUT SO AMAZINGLY FANTASTIC. I'm crying because of the ending and because I can't read more of this series, but I'm working on Cupcake Chronicles: Learning to Laugh. I'm a bit confused but it's really good. I love your fan fictions, this one definitely touched me the most out of all of them.

I'm guessing the Rainbow Factory is going to be next...

That ending XD ... Now talking about the whole thing, simply wonderful. This is just wonderful. Amazing work!

...wat

Awww damn, son, that ending. :D Also the "shed" reference in an earlier chapter had me on the floor.

Is that a bit of foreshadowing I see in that ending there? :3

OH DEAR LAWD GOD SAVE US ALL

Ok, another heart jump at the ending there...I DEMAND somepony explain that it is not what I think...
Really good, except that I keep getting all mixed up with the "last week", "half a year ago" etc; thing. Would appreciate if you make a sequel (maybe you have, too lazy to check now), could you just make it straight forward a little? Not too much just...
Mews and purrs,
Meowzerz1275

My heart seriously jumped at the "stay outta my shed part" and I accually gave a sigh of relief when explained.
Reallly good so far, well written, and I LOVE the fact that you have the ability to fit everything together. How DO you do that!?
Mews and purrs,
Meowzerz1275

P.s. ponies drink coffee? Wow...

Best series ever. Only good authors can make MLP truly sad.

OHMIGOSH RAINBOW FACTORY?

Please bring this back its sooooooooo addicting please i love this

*whimpers* N-no...I-impossible-I thought I banished you foul fanfiction. Wha-a repost? Well then...guess I'll have to destroy you at the sorce this time. :) Time to die Rainbow Factory!

I ran across this story thanks to a rather failed attempt to upset bronies on the mlp thread at 4chan... First the original story which disturbed and intrigued me greatly, then a mention of your alternative ending. Immediately I knew it was something I had to read. I admit to some minor shipping of apple dash and I've never truly let myself explore any content of the pairing and I figured this was as good as a time as any.

I read your stories about this from beginning to now today and I honesty can tell you I have never felt so emotional from a written piece then I have from this. I cried repeatedly. This was one of the most moving and well written stories i have ever read here and I thank you a ton for bringing this to us. Everyone who was involved in it I thank.

You guys really do rock... (woohoo)