Cute story! Loved the pairings.

I enjoyed this very much, especially after reading the chapters in Closing the Distance that are up. I think the best part was Vincent's POV when he went to meet the Turks.

man do I hate public effection, but elena and tseng deserve their freedom to be together in public, and show it if they want. I like this chapter as a ending to and are glad you published it. Great story!

this makes me wonder, what is it with hojo and pregnant woman. That's a wierd fetish there. And I do hope sephiroth finally gets over his truamatic and regretfull experiances. Again you do an excellent job of relaying the feelings of characters to readers. Random side note: if they had a kid it would totally look like kadaj XD...in my mind, anyways back to the story. I wish I could just go on a vacation when I mess things up big time loling at rufus...for a sec I was like wtf the end? what? I must be so drunk I see a seven. XD

f*ck being the cat can I be in yuffies place :3. I was so into this story I havent said anything about how awesomely written it is and stuff like that, sorry - bows- so far the plot and egerything are going smoothly and are very gripping. Now back to me talking about the actual story because I'm pitifull at talking about those things. Poor vincet, he's so truamatized over his past. If that tape showed hojo doing some wierd bondage set up with himself and an animal, I would have died laughing so hard in fact, I was thinking, one, why does he record himself and two, its probably a self made porno vincent will turn all chaos mode on and destroy and aeris will faint and there will be no evidence of tsengs doings XD.

...I wish I was pissy the cat right now -.-, love how big brotherly reno is to elena even though he's so embarrased about showing his emotions...and wierd shit like that loling. Awww godfather reno - instanly pictures italian mafia- that was sweet. I wish yuffie finished her story, that had to be like, the most epic battle of yuffie ft yuffie the epic ninja and side characters XD me and yuffie are so alike, when it comes to bragging, sort of lol. Vincent and lucretcia moments always deserve awws and faning over, until the ugh..kissing part I felt randomly embarrased over. Never mind sephiroth and Aeris are so much better. Still both couples seem normal, normal like problems and fighting and lust almost like they dont have un human powers and such XD

off all the obscene things reno said, what in the hell is test tube sex -dies laughing- and then we get to the password, good god this man is a freak, I'm gonna be so sick, after I stop laughing but then again a paraphilia is normally what psycos have. Once reno's speech was over me:T-T, I'm glad they decided to stick together...holy hell, laughs happily at hojo. Beautiful!

although I really hate quoting. "That isn't important. What is, is that I have never had an opportunity to use my own genetic material in any of the previous experiments." that made me really happy XD but then after that I was disgusted by his pervertedness. Ugh, the thought itself made me want to bludgeon myself, anyways it was like I was right there watching the entire chapter unable to smack, or punch, the living hell out of hojo, excuse me launguage :D . -reno parts- got huge fan moments of annoying "yay! Reno" ect, and pissy? Loling at name and origin of that but its so cute. Final note, stupid, rufus and his perfect hair, I never liked him either and in this story he just earns hate points from me only a sick person would side with hojo.

first off: celebratory -it's not reno's baby dance!-. Now that that's out of the way, ahem, since I didnt read the characters listed at the top the entire time I was on the edge of my seat wondering who the heck the father was. I dont know why I suspected between reno or tsung? Also, I was cursing hojo from the begining, that bastard, so vile and evil and Ugly XD and then when he went to elena and insulted and threatned her, more bad words. The emotions you relay though your writing style are amazing. I really do admire them and how they make the scene flow along, along with your descriptions of feelings in the moment, magnifique.

Wow, way to start off with great tension! I'm not even familiar with the fandom, and I had the "Creepy super-villain" vibe from Hojo right from the beginning!
Is this the baby I read about in your other fic, the one with the tragic ending?
Cool story, dude. ;)

I'll come back to the rest soon. Great start!
-Mary

I really like your writing style. I don't know much about the fandom but this story is easy to follow so far and is really enjoyable.

Great chapter once again!
Them trying to guess the passwords totally made me laugh, despite how grim the situation is.
Also... Why would Reeve (or anyone sane for that matter...) name a cat Pissy?
The ending of this chapter... HOLY SHITx9000. That is all...

Holy wow. This chapter had me clinging onto every word. It was action packed, chilled me to the bone... Well done, Jen!

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Today I'm reviewing the first chapter of our beloved Jen's fic On My Honour. It certianly has a great start, this reviewer can cay for certain! The first description of this Dr Hojo (I keep thinking HOBO) CREEPS ME THE HELL OUT. I certainly wouldn't want him to be in charge of my healthcare! On has to wonder what this plan of his is and how it will benefit him...

Oh wow. Looks like Elena's pregnant folks! And it's an unwelcome surprise at that! It couldn't come at a worst time for her, it seems! And Dr Hojo knew before she did and is threatening her. One has to wonder what this "opportunity" is...

Tseng's appearance... a tense text (Alliteration FTW!) He gets home, gets the news... and TAKES IT RELATIVELY WELL, FOLKS!

HAHAHA! Enough of the TV style recap. You already know what's happened, duh. I loved this first chapter. Itb certainly was a great start and established key elements of the plot early on. I look forward to reading more!

Very interesting start to this story. It seems very realistic and is very well-written. The story isn't nearly all dialogue but it isn't all description either. I like the balance.