I can't think of any advice. This story seems perfect. You have given the reader enough information to understand what is going on and you haven't rushed any of it. It was a bit short, but that is contrasted by the content. This story is really sweet, and I think that it is an interesting way to to one of these stories. 9/10 (Because it seemed a bit short) I also noticed, there were almost no spelling and grammar errors, of which there are far too many these days. Good job.

I enjoyed this story, I really did. There was, in my opinion, only one major flaw. Pacing. The story just has things happening like Bambambambam, and never really slows down to let the characters breathe. I was curious about what Rainbow Dash talked to Rarity about, I felt like you skipped over that and some other parts that could have made the story flow better. To reiterate, I liked your story, just slow down on the next one.

I love it! AppleDash :D

This is really well done. I can't say enough how much I love this. But I just read that you wanted some feedback on how to improve it, so here comes: When Applejack reveals her crush on RD to Twilight, you should try to describe Twilights reaction bit. Same goes for RD and Rarity.

When RD confesses her love to AJ and AJ replies that she feels the same, RD isn't surprised for one second. You should try to describe her reaction abit.

But these are just minor tweaks. YOu did a really great job there! I hope you write more of these in the future

Love the rainbow, taste the rainbow xD

I love skittles along with this story. It was a nice little fic _

Skittles. Kissing Rainbow Dash is TOTALLY like eating Skittles.