good go on

interesting

interesting go on!

soo confusing!

Excellent althougfh Harry is a little too forgiving of everyone not telling him he had sister nor did his parents tell him when he used tehs tone.

And she is with Draco Malfoy so I think Harry should be feeling huurt especially if say Draco married her and got the Potter lordship which is rightfully Harrys

This is definitely my favorite chapter so far! I think it would be interesting to do a chapter in Dumbledore or Snapes POV.. (from the dead?) Maybe Dumbledore talks about why he wanted to keep them separated or you could possibly have Snape talking about Ddores idea to keep them apart sort of thing. Possibly in a letter? Just an idea! Keep it up :)

cute go on!

i think it cound have been abit longer, with more detail.

other than that, it was a good chapter. so please update sooner.

I do think Harry is being too forgiving and what about his grandparents they let his suffer abuse and neglect for many years if I was him I would be cursing them as well as his mother for what he went through.

Personally I think many others such as Minerva etc have a lot to apoligise for.

Maybe Harry could find his parents wills at gringotts and get the Potter lordship saince he is intitled to it.

Good 2nd chapter.

Harry is going to be shocked and angered that people have been lying to him especially if Malfoy knew the truth

I wonder will now that Voldermort has been defeated be able to contact Harry as I am sure it is very unfair for him to go through out his life not knowing he has a sister until he gets to teh afterlife where the bombshell is dropped on him

I hope cho etc dont know she is Harrys sister as I am sure Harry will feel betrayed.

hopefully a naother chaptrr wopuld be nice I think Dumbledore etc have a lot to apoligise for and I think Harrys sister needs to speak to him especially if she kknew of teh abuse he was forced to enduire