You wrote this in SCIENCE CLASS?! Cool!
Just kidding, but well done!
My weapon approves as well!

I LOVE LEMON / Sex
( I havent done it, since I'm only 13 but... I LOVE THE ACTION )
O/O *blush* *nosebleed*

This was soo good since I'm a M rated person but could I ask why it says "My" instead of "You". Just so the reader knows they are in the story :D. Anyway great job

THANK YOU SOOOO MUCH! IT WAS AWESOME!