senju scroll is gone?

Wow. How is a story of this epic proportion on the 51st page of the Naruto Fanfic Archive? Seems crazy to me. Perhaps if they allowed you to search for stories at a higher minimum of 100K I would've found this sooner. I'll be sure to read the first few chapters to determine if I should spend much of my free time reading this.

I gotta say this might genuinely be the best fanfic I’ve personally ever read. The plot was great, and it kept twists and turns when it needed to to keep me interested. And ALL character deaths were well timed, aside from Shino’s. I didn’t really see the point in killing him off but then again I doubt he’d be able to do anything towards the end. So it’s forgivable. The fight scenes were very descriptive and well played out as well. For me, this was absolute GOLD. And I loved every second of it. I’m really glad you wrote this :)

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Pretty satisfying overall to read except for Fiore's threat. She knows how powerful everyone in the room is and how outnumbered she is and she threatens them not lightly but excessive enough to account for a similar Quiraji mindset? I am very surprised none of them attacked her out is simple prejudice as in their nature but to not really react at all to such a blatant threat? Her motivations were good but she relied on them all returning to the same thought process she had without really explaining herself and she may have kick started a war against the civilians, Sasuke on her side or not. unlike before the Cascading Flow do have specialized weapons but none of the special warriors or sheer numbers that made the Quiraji so dangerous and this particular group of survivors are the best adapted to fighting Quiraji.

Fiore is powerful against Quiraji, not necessarily so against the other people in the room.

Aside from this scene that felt very much forced and stubborn on Fiore's part I found everything excellent and admire the fact you managed to finish this epic length story so well done. You deserve it.

Pretty satisfying overall to read except for Fiore's threat. She knows how powerful everyone in the room is and how outnumbered she is and she threatens them not lightly but excessive enough to account for a similar Quiraji mindset? I am very surprised none of them attacked her out is simple prejudice as in their nature but to not really react at all to such a blatant threat? Her motivations were good but she relied on them all returning to the same thought process she had without really explaining herself and she may have kick started a war against the civilians, Sasuke on her side or not. unlike before the Cascading Flow do have specialized weapons but none of the special warriors or sheer numbers that made the Quiraji so dangerous and this particular group of survivors are the best adapted to fighting Quiraji.

Fiore is powerful against Quiraji, not necessarily so against the other people in the room.

Aside from this scene that felt very much forced and stubborn on Fiore's part I found everything excellent and admire the fact you managed to finish this epic length story so well done. You deserve it.

I'm binging this story and I love it but this one glaring fact that Hinata can practically be naked in front of other sailors in strip poker but she's going to flip out with a drunk woman near Naruto? It just really really feels off and I'm just commenting because it just strikes me the wrong way.

Other than that this is a phenomenal story and keep it up, just voicing something that frustrated me.

Holy hell man. You did really well with all the battles shown in this chapter.

Well, that was an interesting chapter.

I really like how you do story spotlights. I'll be sure to check out some of them.

Huh, heads be flying while the shinigami feasts on thy soul. Nicely done on this chapter.

Woooow. This was a fun chapter to read.

Huh, wow. I knew the village was totaled cause of the summary, but you did pretty well with the reactions. Nice job on this chapter.

Wow. This seems interesting.

Whyyyy oh why the two teacher and one girl have to be left behind? I thought it is gonna be an adventure of all 12 geninssenseis...
So sad...
And it should be namikaze instead of namizake
Good chapters so far, hopefully i enjoy it

'Twas the First that laid the foundation, but it was the Second that truly built Konoha.

Kishimotoa is the First.
And you, the second.