Wow, this was like the anime if Yuu and Yomi had swapped places completely :p I love it. And Saya not acting like a psycho, tehe. I might want a deeper relationship between her and Saya but overall one of the better fics I've read. Keep it up! 3

Oh man this is awesome! Seriously! I love it! Please update soon! can't wait for the next chapter!

I like it, its an interesting combination of the OVA and the Anime. I hope to see more of your great work! :)

Things got rolling very nicely here. The pacing is good, the dialogue is true to character, and the situation is handled in a realistic manner. Well, as realistic as this series is anyway. Overall, a nice start to a story.

Awesome, a fic from Yuu's perspective! To be honest I actually never thought much about Yuu in the OVA or in the anime until recently; I was too caught up with Mato and Yomi and Yuu was just 'that girl who gets inbetween them'. But this fic actually made me feel bad for her. When your best friend stops paying attention to you and starts paying attention to someone else, that's really rough. I thought you portrayed that feeling really well in this fic. I thought the breaks near the end were particularly effective in showing how the two of them, Yuu and Mato, were growing apart.

I also really liked how you portrayed Saya in this fic. She's charming and I can see why Yuu would go to her for more advice in the future. Super looking forward to reading about the evolution of Saya and Yuu's relationship! You have some minor spelling mistakes here and there but I really enjoyed this fic and will definitely be looking forward to reading more! Keep it up yo.