Wow, that was indeed a very dark fic... quite depressing, actually, and the whole time I was afraid it was actually just all Clive's imagination and that Graeme was really dead... but then again you wouldn't do that, so... yeah. Great story, I have to say :)

It's right though to refer to the car accident not as an accident but as a traffic collision, since suggesting that it was noone's fault would really exacerbate things, whatever that may mean

But seriously, the ending, especially, got under my skin. It was beautiful, and I loved it, so thanx for that :)

Very nice! One of those 'I think therefore I am' type of fanfics. Very thought provoking!

Ok, first off I'm gonna get all these amazing references that I spotted out:

"Traffic collision" xD

"Exacerbate" (that film is the only reason I know what that means lol)

"Lady Luck" this time he didn't get struck by lightening did he ;)

"Inspector Doyle" as in Dennis Doyle from downstairs? Haha

I've probably missed some cos you're way too awesome at slipping your references in, but anyway, the story.

Wow! This was so powerful! I really loved it! As I read the part when the doctor was saying how Graeme & Clive had been drugged & that Graeme had actually died & that Paul wasn't real... I can't even... You had me convinced! I was thinking "OMG! This is trippy!" haha fantastic story once again, m'dear! Thank you for sharing!