ths was written over 4 years ago but i love this a lot

I love this! I adore how you made Roger's thoughts seem so chaotic and discordant, and your interpretation of Roger and Jack's relationship was brilliant! :)

I love Roger. And this. Great job. :D

I like the chaos and the sort of 'stream of consciousness' style it had. I could see this actually happening in the book, it's really good!

Yes. This is brilliant. I can totally imagine Roger being like that, and I really love the way you wrote this. And I like the chaos. The chaos is nice.