This is some quality good shit right there! I need more of these in my life!

Holy cow that was awesome!

that was good, finish the Damn story Bitch

damn, this is amazing...

This is great and I love it! I hope there will be more chapters

I loved it, i would post more on the review but my computer is being crap right now. i can't wait to read more, hopefully tomorrow. i love the way you showed spain, the dark side was an awesome add to his character. as for lovino he was beautiful as he always is(i'm so not a commplete fanboy of lovi XD). anyways, its really good so far, can't wait to read the next chapter

*-* You're so Talented! Please update soon :)

I love how descriptive it is and the portrayal of characters were amazing. I felt the tension building up as the chapter comes along. I pretty much held my breath. The story is very unique in it's own way. This is completely addicting to read due to the emotion, suspense and unpredictability of the whole story. Your talent in writing is surely shown in every chapter. I'm truly hoping you continue the story!

This. Is. Absolutely. Genious. The way you've built the tension, the plot and the prison reality is just flawless. The last chapter was the cherry on a tort! It had so big, yet little plot twist! God, this is the best mafia story I've ever read, not only from fanfiction, from all!(though I don't remember reading any non-hetalia mafia stories...but in the stories, films with mafia background)

I thought I'd throw up at the mention of the vices. When Romulus made his own grandchildren/children choose from such horrible things. I've really felt sick in my stomach at the mention of Romano practically whore, but at the same time I admired the line with Romano worrying about forming relationships. You've really had your brain turned on all the time, trying to feel all this mafia, not making any of the chapters predictable.

You say the characters are a bit OOC, but that's the perfect way to write a fanfic. I don't like when people just "stick with canon" and make Romano grumpy nomatterwhat, and Spain happy-go-lucky nomatterwhat. That-s not even canon! Romano's able to smile, enjoy something too! And not be a 200-years old man who doesn't want anything and doesn't enjoy anything. Spain, on the other hand, is able to be angry, sad or simply don't fall in love with Romano's venom, insults and attitude instantly, ignore Romano's "I hate you"'s and smother him with overpowering love at first sight or because yes. It's shown in the series! But fans are lazy and ignore that. You're doing great.

I know it's, like, 3 years after you srarted writing this piece of art, but I just beg you to continue it! I'll stand next to your bed with an axe and kolkol a "update" if it'd be necessary! ;-; You've really got talent and one could've felt the tension, those fights, this pertinacity dripping with every chapter! It absolutely lands on my favourites with high supplications that you'll continue this!

(I hope they'll somehow understand their mistakes and that killing is bad, and that all what they've done in life was very bad)

Just pleaaaaaaase!

amazing! keep writting! very descriptive.

I absolutely adore the way you portrayed the characters here - and I probably shouldn't be saying that about a pair of criminals, but it's true. The story is dark, funny, and gripping. I am so intrigued by this I will almost certainly dream about it tonight, and I do not count that as a bad thing. Thank you so much for writing this. Now for a spot of shameless begging:
PLEASE, O GREAT AND ALMIGHTY PINKSNOWBOOTS, PLEASE UPDATE.

This is the best fanfic I have ever read! I really hope you update soon because its amazing!

UPDATE, PLEASE

mORE

Please continue? Super good story you got. I'm addicted.