Reviews for Return to the Past
sunita92 chapter 10 . 9/29/2016
Love this story!
sunita92 chapter 9 . 9/29/2016
She's awake?!
sunita92 chapter 8 . 9/29/2016
This chapter was quite confusing but I hope there will be explanation in the next chapter
sunita92 chapter 7 . 9/29/2016
I am really loving this plot.
sunita92 chapter 6 . 9/28/2016
Omg I really love the plot. They way you wrote this chapter was filled was so much emotions.
sunita92 chapter 5 . 9/28/2016
Totally love this chapter! Love the way you write their fluff moment.
sunita92 chapter 4 . 9/28/2016
I really like this chapter! They kissed and I like how this is going.
sunita92 chapter 3 . 9/28/2016
Squeals! Finally some action. The first fanfic I read about them that have mana saving him.
sunita92 chapter 2 . 9/28/2016
I can't wait to see atem and mana fluff
sunita92 chapter 1 . 9/28/2016
Ooh I like how the story started. Anyway I recently started watching yugioh again and recalled how much I ship atem and mana. The most adorable couple!
ASDFHWSOWOI chapter 10 . 3/4/2015
I LOVED YOUR STORY 0w0. It was so sweet and wonderfully written! I love how Atem truly shows he loves Mana and just the way this story is written... it's so beautiful, romantic, "fantastical", and adventurous, all in one. Please keep writing more AtemXMana fanfictions! :D
The Queen of Water chapter 10 . 6/18/2012
That was great.
Jetzul chapter 10 . 3/14/2012
-_- THat's it? That's the end of the extremely thrilling story?

That can only mean one thing...

LET THE NEXT ONE COME OUT!

The end was a bit weird, but the story held together. Too fluffy for my taste (why does Anna make me read romance? Beats me. It's her secret.)

If you want to know who I am, I'm the random dude you met on deviantart with who you nearly started laughing in philosophy class.

Jetzul...remember me well...I shall return from a different dimension...I am darkness...HAHAHA! HAHAHA! HAHA!(If this got you WTF or freaked you out, then SCORE!)
Anevay chapter 10 . 3/12/2012
Aw, cute! I loved this story - sad it's over! I'll definitely take a look at your next story!

-Anevay
Aqua Burst 7 chapter 10 . 3/12/2012
I liked how this ended.

No offence, my why isn't this marked as complete?
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