I really like the idea behind this, please wright more soon. I'd love to see what kind of geass Light ends up with, do you have any ideas yet? If you dont you can always give him Lelouch's since they're so alike

I would love to see how this progresses. Please update soon, kay.

intresting love to see were this goes

Aw, I love it! It's funny / cute so far and it has an awesome premise. Please continue?

I am not amused...by how this story looks. Though, I am amused by the story. Try making a line right after "I don't have any marshmallows on me.

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Like that, so it looks better. As for the story layout, try indenting paragraphs and make sure character's lines are seperate paragraph's themselves. That will make your story pretty. Aside from that and a few spelling and grammer errors, I like it. Please do continue.

I suppose we should be grateful the 2nd prince didn't find the Death Note. I doubt Lulu will follow Lights exact path but the Prime Minister would in a heart beat.

Well... I guess i should say good luck with making the story longger.